DOWNLOAD: Grey Street, Dave & Tim Style!

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DOWNLOAD: Grey Street, Dave & Tim Style!

Unread post by dmbguitar718 » Wed Feb 18, 2004 8:28 pm

This was a spur of the moment recording. I recording for no particular reason. Its missing the third verse because I used the warehouse version as a reference.

Let me know what you think.

Oh, and I sang! finally!

http://www.patmcinnis.com/greystreet.mp3

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Unread post by nugsta25 » Wed Feb 18, 2004 8:34 pm

Absolutely kick ass man. Sick guitar skills. I think I'm gonna listen a couple more times!
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Unread post by dmbguitar718 » Wed Feb 18, 2004 8:38 pm

hey thanks alot nugsta. :)

i just listened to it again, and i found that my vocals struggle alot at times.
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Unread post by Humble Monkey » Wed Feb 18, 2004 8:47 pm

Good guitar work! Are playing both guitar parts? Good job.

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Unread post by GreedylilPig » Wed Feb 18, 2004 8:50 pm

That was very well done. Guitar work was very impressive. The contrast that begins at 3:20 is particularly impressive. The vocals fell flat a couple times but nothing too bad. Excellent quality. What kind of setup are you using?
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Unread post by dmbguitar718 » Wed Feb 18, 2004 9:01 pm

I used my line in port to record everything. No special effects really, just some reverb added after. :)

Thanks guys, this is some fast feedback. :)

Oh, and yes, I'm playing both guitar parts.

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Unread post by Speenis » Thu Feb 19, 2004 12:08 am

sounds pretty damn sweet man! Guitar was very nice, and vocals were quite pleasant
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Unread post by 2StepGranny » Thu Feb 19, 2004 3:44 am

That was pretty sweet brother. I can't wait to hear more of what you've got :-) Keep 'em coming man!!! :-D
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Unread post by NPR » Thu Feb 19, 2004 11:44 am

Mr. Pat McInnis that Rocked!!!

Really liked the guitar. You always nail the guitar in all of your songs. My only small problem was with the vocals. Just need to work on those a bit and throw just a bit more passion into them and what some others said above.

Keep up the good work man!
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Unread post by Locarius » Thu Feb 19, 2004 12:25 pm

Incredible pickups in your guitar. Sounded brilliant. Can you tell me what equipment you used?

If I were to give one suggestion I would say that the timing was slightly off between the guitar tracks in some parts, that could be one aspect to work on.

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Unread post by dmbguitar718 » Thu Feb 19, 2004 1:02 pm

Locarius wrote:Incredible pickups in your guitar. Sounded brilliant. Can you tell me what equipment you used?

If I were to give one suggestion I would say that the timing was slightly off between the guitar tracks in some parts, that could be one aspect to work on.
Thanks :) I did notice that some parts lagged behind the other, and I wish now that I would have fixed that.

As for the pickup, I'm using a Takamine EG334SC plugged into my line in port. The gutar has an N4B preamp.

Takamine.com says this:

"The warm-sounding N4B preamp is featured on selected G Series models."

Not that that really matters, but just to let you know. :)

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Unread post by Bartender2424 » Thu Feb 19, 2004 1:48 pm

I can only get the first 20seconds of it!!
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Unread post by dmbguitar718 » Thu Feb 19, 2004 1:55 pm

Bartender2424 wrote:I can only get the first 20seconds of it!!
hmm...

try right clicking "save as"

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Unread post by horsmar15 » Thu Feb 19, 2004 2:28 pm

Guitar was really awesome on this one. Vocals need a little work, but that will come with practice and as your voice matures.

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Unread post by DustyDave » Thu Feb 19, 2004 3:35 pm

Rock on brother that was nice :)
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