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First music post - gettem' while there hot...........or not

Unread post by Humble Monkey » Sun Feb 15, 2004 9:19 am

I was able to use Angelfire finally, I kept wondering why I couldn't log-in after I created an account......it turned out it was my damn ad-blocker. :?
I don't really have that many recordings on my PC, but here's a couple of them for now:

me & a bandmate @ a local bar -- Say Goodbye
me playing a tune of John Mayers -- Luv Song 4 no 1

I've been playing for almost 6 years, & only in the last few, have really started to challenge myself w/ tunes from artists like Dave & John Mayer.

anyway...let me know what you guys think....positive or negative -- I don't care :)

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Unread post by taylordb » Sun Feb 15, 2004 11:41 am

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Unread post by NPR » Sun Feb 15, 2004 11:58 am

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Unread post by 2StepGranny » Sun Feb 15, 2004 1:11 pm

Sites down :-( Well I look forward to hearing it when it's working again ;-)
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Unread post by DMBFan63 » Sun Feb 15, 2004 1:24 pm

I listened to Say Goodbye.. nice opening lol.. it was a very solid recording.. i would expect more out of 6 years of playing, but i can see 1 year of serious playing ;) Good Job
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fresh links

Unread post by Humble Monkey » Sun Feb 15, 2004 4:52 pm

Damn, didn't realize how fast those links would be suspended. I re-uploaded them to another account, hope these stay up longer:

*edited--they shut down the 2nd Angelfire account I created, but the links at the top of the page are still working though*]
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Unread post by DT » Sun Feb 15, 2004 5:21 pm

the guitar in say goodbye is solid, its got just enough style to not distract from the song itself and stays close to the way dave plays it... dont know if thats good or bad necessarily but i think it sounds good

i dont know how to explain it, the singer sounds like he's trying too hard or something... hes got a good voice but its like hes trying to sound emotional and drag out the beginnings and endings of some words to create feeling but i didnt feel it....

nice work

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Unread post by freshead16 » Sun Feb 15, 2004 10:15 pm

is that u or john himself? that mayer cover was amazing. Incredible. :D

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Unread post by NPR » Sun Feb 15, 2004 10:20 pm

Yeah man that Mayer cover was dead on man!
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Unread post by ec_costanzo » Sun Feb 15, 2004 10:22 pm

WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! The Mayer cover is right on. Sounds just like John!!!!!!!
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Unread post by BaitChunker » Sun Feb 15, 2004 11:41 pm

hey i wanna hear the mayer one i cant open the link though
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Unread post by Humble Monkey » Mon Feb 16, 2004 12:43 am

Thanks for your comments guys, ... I hope you realize that is NOT me singing on the Mayer tune -- haha. Since I don't sing, sometimes I'll take a song & edit it w/ Cool Edit Pro & try to 'minimize' the guitar and 'maximize' the vocals. That recording was me playing along w/ John ---just to clarify.

I remember seeing someone on the board mention that he/she used the Dell factory mic to record with; so do I, & it actually sounds better than some of the other stuff I've used.

Anyways thanks again for the feedback, hopefully those links will be back up soon for those who couldn't get em'.

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Unread post by Sarah » Mon Feb 16, 2004 3:14 pm

Those are great :D

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Unread post by 2StepGranny » Mon Feb 16, 2004 4:12 pm

Those were both very good, I enjoyed both of them good work Humble! :-)
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Unread post by AdamCU81 » Mon Feb 16, 2004 6:53 pm

The vocals on Say Goodbye sound nasal and the breathing could use work. At the end of ever phrase there's a release of breath that reminds me of a preacher....it gets kind of annoying to me. Otherwise good stuff.

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