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Unread post by Pickles » Sun Feb 15, 2009 12:41 am

I have a new track up at www.purevolume.com/Shaneathan

It's called "Oldie but moldy" and it simply goes through the few parts that I will eventually piece together in a song (as well as some fun stuff in the end).

I'd be interested to hear critiques.

Note: I'm aware that my playing is choppy at points. I'm just looking for overall critiques.

Thanks!
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Unread post by markTR » Sun Feb 15, 2009 6:23 pm

Not really sure how to critique this as, like you said, it's pretty choppy and doesn't really have a fluid progression. Seems like you got something cool, definitely post whatever the finished product ends up being.
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Unread post by Pickles » Sun Feb 15, 2009 6:59 pm

markTR wrote:Not really sure how to critique this as, like you said, it's pretty choppy and doesn't really have a fluid progression. Seems like you got something cool, definitely post whatever the finished product ends up being.
That's the kinda stuff I was looking for. If you liked the ideas or not. Thanks!
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