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Unread post by ec_costanzo » Sun Feb 08, 2004 5:18 pm

Please leave all comments
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http://www.angelfire.com/ab7/ericostanz ... k_Veil.mp3
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Unread post by ec_costanzo » Sun Feb 08, 2004 5:21 pm

Ohh yea the singing sucks
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Unread post by Matty Boom » Sun Feb 08, 2004 5:24 pm

the singing was too quiet most of the time and you fell out of key a lot, but it was good to see you putting up some vocals!...and it sounded like you had some hitches with the guitar playing trying to keep everything together...keep postin brohan, good effort
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Unread post by ec_costanzo » Sun Feb 08, 2004 5:26 pm

yea my washburn is in the shop right now
I was usuing my guitar that doesnt even compare to the action
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Unread post by DustyDave » Sun Feb 08, 2004 6:47 pm

I agree with what Matty said , but keep on posting brother , only critique will give you guidance on what to work on :)
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Unread post by AdamCU81 » Sun Feb 08, 2004 6:55 pm

Great to hear a song with vocals. I agree that the guitar was a little shaky, but you explained why. Good stuff again.
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Unread post by geekmug » Mon Feb 09, 2004 12:55 am

interesting take on the tune.. needs work but glad to hear some singing :)
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Unread post by ec_costanzo » Mon Feb 09, 2004 6:37 pm

Thanks for the comments
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Unread post by dmb_tatertot » Thu Feb 12, 2004 3:17 am

Obviously the guitar you were using wasnt the best available (understatement lol), but it still sounded good. The vocals can use some work as you fell out of pitch a fair amount. Also seemed to have some trouble holding high notes, but that just comes with practice. Keep up the good work man.

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Unread post by Raif2032 » Thu Feb 12, 2004 6:56 am

To be fair on the singing...i've heard worse. Keep posting and get some confidence, it'll help boatloads!

Try playing around with different songs to see which ones you are comfortable singing with.

The playing was pretty on most of the time...I think. ( there is a girl asleep in the room and I don't want to be loud)

overall, not bad...keep it up
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