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by GreedylilPig » Wed Sep 10, 2008 7:32 pm
Quick little tune. Just put some extra light Martin Marquis strings on the Larivee - I think it might sound a bit too tinny and I'm curious to hear feedback on that in particular. I appreciate any comments and/or critiques that you might have.
http://plaza.ufl.edu/bbatson/wildflowers.mp3 [2:42]
You belong among the wildflowers
You belong in a boat out at sea
Sail away, kill off the hours
You belong somewhere you feel free
Run away, find you a lover
Go away somewhere all bright and new
I have seen no other
Who compares with you
You belong among the wildflowers
You belong in a boat out at sea
You belong with your love on your arm
You belong somewhere you feel free
Run away, go find a lover
Run away, let your heart be your guide
You deserve the deepest of cover
You belong in that home by and by
You belong among the wildflowers
You belong somewhere close to me
Far away from your trouble and worries
You belong somewhere you feel free
You belong somewhere you feel free
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by whatshername » Wed Sep 10, 2008 7:35 pm
i kinda like the sound of the strings. how much were they?
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by GreedylilPig » Wed Sep 10, 2008 7:38 pm
whatshername wrote:i kinda like the sound of the strings. how much were they?
Thanks Whit. Strings were really cheap. Somewhere around $6 or $7.
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by whatshername » Wed Sep 10, 2008 7:40 pm
GreedylilPig wrote:whatshername wrote:i kinda like the sound of the strings. how much were they?
Thanks Whit. Strings were really cheap. Somewhere around $6 or $7.
oh wow. good to know. maybe i'll try them in a few weeks. i'm putting on some elixirs in a week or so.
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by markTR » Wed Sep 10, 2008 7:45 pm
This is awesome. Vocals are spot on, guitar work is very well done. Thanks for this
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by GreedylilPig » Thu Sep 11, 2008 10:11 pm
markTR wrote:This is awesome. Vocals are spot on, guitar work is very well done. Thanks for this
Thanks for the listen, Mark. I'm looking forward to your next posted recording.
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by myxomatosis » Thu Sep 11, 2008 11:46 pm
what kind of Larivee do you have?
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by GreedylilPig » Fri Sep 12, 2008 6:44 am
L-09 Aura
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by ut4ever8 » Fri Sep 12, 2008 11:40 am
Brian I freaking love your voice man. Can you please give me some kind of singing lessons. Im reaching the point of hopeless and this is exactly the type of sound I wish I had
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by Klondog » Fri Sep 12, 2008 12:06 pm
ut4ever8 wrote:Brian I freaking love your voice man. Can you please give me some kind of singing lessons. Im reaching the point of hopeless and this is exactly the type of sound I wish I had
Yeah, I couldn't agree more. I love your voice, and your playing is always spot on.
Great work as always, man! Looking forward to your next recording already.
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by skilly » Fri Sep 12, 2008 12:29 pm
incredible stuff man, i love the vibe i get from all of your music.
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by myxomatosis » Fri Sep 12, 2008 9:56 pm
skilly wrote:incredible stuff man, i love the vibe i get from all of your music.
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by RunsWithBuffalo » Sat Sep 13, 2008 1:39 pm
Love it Brian. Petty fits your vocals perfectly and the guitar sounds great. I like those strings a lot and they are super cheap. You should add the piano fills if you get the chance, they make that song.
I'm not crazy about the doubled vocals on some of the "You belong" parts, maybe try harmony instead?
Solid work though, really good.
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by iha » Sat Sep 13, 2008 10:25 pm
GreedylilPig wrote:L-09 Aura
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by GreedylilPig » Sun Sep 14, 2008 8:58 am
Thanks a lot for the feedback, guys. Very much appreciated.
iha wrote:GreedylilPig wrote:L-09 Aura
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