Original Song (Please Critique)

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Original Song (Please Critique)

Unread post by wkpggrvn2001 » Fri Aug 15, 2008 2:21 pm

It's been a while, I would appreciate a few listens and some critiquing. It's far from finished (like every song I start on). Its only about 2 min 30 seconds right now and all acoustic, no lyrics (can't sing and wouldnt want to put anyone through that agony). Its streaming so just click the link. Any ideas on where else to take it are like always more than welcome.

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/default ... dID=864645

The song is called Something New, because it is and I don't have another name for it and it is the only song uploaded so it shouldnt be too hard to find.

Thanks in advance.
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Re: Original Song (Please Critique)

Unread post by Banjobach » Fri Aug 15, 2008 3:26 pm

link no worky
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Re: Original Song (Please Critique)

Unread post by wkpggrvn2001 » Fri Aug 15, 2008 3:37 pm

what's showing up when you click on it?
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Re: Original Song (Please Critique)

Unread post by wkpggrvn2001 » Fri Aug 15, 2008 3:43 pm

Posted the correct link above and here

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/default ... dID=864645
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Re: Original Song (Please Critique)

Unread post by Easy E » Fri Aug 15, 2008 3:45 pm

some of the slides in the beginning are too slow, other than that, pretty good man
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Re: Original Song (Please Critique)

Unread post by markTR » Sat Aug 16, 2008 5:19 pm

I like this a lot, caught myself trying to put some melody to it as I was listening. Good work man
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Re: Original Song (Please Critique)

Unread post by wkpggrvn2001 » Sat Aug 16, 2008 8:20 pm

markTR wrote:I like this a lot, caught myself trying to put some melody to it as I was listening. Good work man
Vocally? Because that is what I am really struggling to find.
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