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Unread post by dmbguitar718 » Sat Jan 17, 2004 9:48 pm

I worked pretty hard on this. It got kinda frustrating after a while. It was tricky because I learned most of the standard version and alot of the capoed version in pretty much one day. Overall, I think it sounds real good with both of them in there. Watch out it the end, I don't like how it turned out.

Anyway, here. :)

http://www.patmcinnis.com/stayorleave.mp3
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Unread post by Matty Boom » Sat Jan 17, 2004 9:56 pm

the rhythm tracks here were wonderful, i think there may have been a bump or two but they sounded great...the lead though, it seemed like it didn't have much emotion into it, just hitting notes you know? when you're playing lead, a lot of times, less is more, although i don't know if that really helps you much....definitely a good job though
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Unread post by NPR » Sat Jan 17, 2004 11:21 pm

Sounded great to me man. You should throw down some vocals on it. By the way I love this song!!!
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Unread post by DJR » Sat Jan 17, 2004 11:52 pm

i liked it a lot, except it sounded a bit crowded i guess would be a good word for it, cause like you said you've got both the standard and capo stuff in there - but really cool :D

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Unread post by whatshername » Sun Jan 18, 2004 12:02 am

i want to put some vocals on that so bad. do it up, sing to it!! it felt a little empty :( but other than that it was really good, nice job :)
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Unread post by whatshername » Sun Jan 18, 2004 12:03 am

the part where he goes into "remember we used to laugh..."


YOU GOTTA ADD VOCALS! it's killin me! haha...:)
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Unread post by dmbguitar718 » Sun Jan 18, 2004 10:42 am

haha maybe later i'll add some vocals. but being 15 doesnt help your voice at all. :(
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Unread post by Matty Boom » Sun Jan 18, 2004 10:47 am

hey, unless your clay atinks and your balls haven't dropped yet, you've got nothing to worry about
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Unread post by dmbguitar718 » Sun Jan 18, 2004 12:40 pm

ha, its not that, its just that my voice isnt really at a matured stage yet.
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Unread post by dmbguitar718 » Sun Jan 18, 2004 3:49 pm

top - man, this forum's looking pretty active today. must be the snow. :)
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Unread post by fatjack » Sun Jan 18, 2004 3:50 pm

dmbguitar718 wrote:top - man, this forum's looking pretty active today. must be the snow. :)
or dusty reading every single post from the past two weeks
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Unread post by dmbguitar718 » Sun Jan 18, 2004 4:06 pm

fatjack wrote:
dmbguitar718 wrote:top - man, this forum's looking pretty active today. must be the snow. :)
or dusty reading every single post from the past two weeks
hahah i didnt even realize that. :lol:

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Unread post by DustyDave » Sun Jan 18, 2004 4:28 pm

So sue me :lol: Yeah i haven't been in here the past couple weeks , i have no clue why so don't ask :) But yeah im checking up on everything :lol:

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Unread post by dmbguitar718 » Mon Jan 19, 2004 9:17 pm

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Unread post by i like tictacs » Mon Jan 19, 2004 9:46 pm

Nice.
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