Dont Drink The Water needs critiquing

[dmb_rulz]

http://www.sendspace.com/file/rs9q75

[Taylor614CE]

Hey.

Pro's:
Guitar seems real smooth.
You did a good job with the effects.

Con's:
Just to shoot you straight
you are off key...
voice doesn't match what your playing

[dmb_rulz]

Thanks for the info. From listeing to it again i seem to be playing to fast for the vocals. I was playing and singing at the same time. Which is a weakness for me. Do the vocals sound ok just slow down the rythem??