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My #40 cover

Unread post by DMBartender316 » Sun Jan 04, 2004 9:42 pm

Here is the first song i've ever recorded. I know my singing is off key, but other than that what do you guys think?

http://www.angelfire.com/music5/t_roesch/
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Unread post by DmbFanJason » Mon Jan 05, 2004 1:16 am

pretty good I think...guitar was very good...you're right about the vocals being a little off key. however, you have good emotion and sing well. IF you would stay on key you could sound great though man.

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Unread post by DMBartender316 » Tue Jan 06, 2004 4:02 pm

thanks a lot man, that really builds my confidence :D I was thinking of recording "not myself" next, or maybe jack johnson's taylor, i think my voice may be better suited for jacks songs. Do you know of any books or anything that might help my singing?
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Unread post by isaac » Tue Jan 06, 2004 4:04 pm

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Unread post by horsmar15 » Tue Jan 13, 2004 2:06 pm

i agree with the comments above. I think you have a good sounding voice but you need control. You could be quite good if you just practiced singing more.

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Unread post by DustyDave » Sun Jan 18, 2004 3:40 pm

Yeah like it was said above , a little out of key , but others than that it was very good :) at 1:09 though , you miss the E on 4th ;)
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