You Fooled Me Too - Original (NEW RECORDING)

[HumbleMonkey]

this is a song i posted a while back. sometime somewhat recently i rerecorded it on my somewhat new recorder. i hope to have a bunch more new recordings up this week.

so anyway here it is again with a better recording. thanks

http://www.sendspace.com/file/b70v6z


You Fooled Me Too

And when you're falling I want to be on the ground
to help you touch down
And I wish I could fly I'd fly up to you faster before you fell down
But then you caught yourself before I got hold
of you you fool
You fooled me too

And you asked me to walk you in the dark
You said you needed some guidance to help
find where you had parked
But you had your own light to guide your through
Now I'm alone in the dark without you
But you fool
You fooled me too

And you asked me to do a dance You said you'd come along too
I got dressed real nice and practice my moves and polished my shoes
But when the floor opened up
I was just doin my own groove
Without you you fool
You fooled me too

And you dropped me a line saying you got something for me
I had something for you too
But when I tried to make it something special
I no longer heard from you
There was someone else there with you too
But you fool
You fooled me too

[RunsWithBuffalo]

Much love for the harmonica. Still need to work on the melody though. There are some pitch issues but it sounds like the problem is that are unsure where to go with the melody, kind of like you are experimenting on the fly. Just keep playing the song and it will solidify over time.

I like the lyrics, just nail down the melody you are after and you will have a good song on your hands.

Oh and a bridge with a key change wouldn't hurt to break things up.

[afurth]

i agree about the bridge.

the sound is pretty good, though - i like your voice, the pitch issues will be resolved over time. keep it up!

[Taylor614CE]

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