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Unread post by Ranting Thespian » Thu Jan 01, 2004 11:55 pm

I call this type of songs I write *Abstract Jazz* since I don't know what style they would be, but they are jazzy, fast, and sticato.

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Unread post by fatjack » Fri Jan 02, 2004 12:38 pm

Ranting Thespian wrote:I call this type of songs I write *Abstract Jazz* since I don't know what style they would be, but they are jazzy, fast, and sticato.

http://www.angelfire.com/folk/singer-so ... d_flow.mp3
thats a good concept, but i would definitely make it less staccato. that mine line is just too choppy to be a stand alone riff. if you could smooth it out it would definitely be a lot better.
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Unread post by mastermindmatthews3436 » Fri Jan 02, 2004 2:02 pm

your suspended ranting
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Unread post by dmbguitar718 » Fri Jan 02, 2004 2:03 pm

yeah, its a little choppy. i would go along with fatjack and say slow it down a bit. maybe add a second guitar at some points, that would be cool. overall, it was pretty cool though. keep it up. :)
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