For Her > take 2 ; )

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Combine em' somehow
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screw both!
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For Her > take 2 ; )

Unread post by firedancer86 » Sat May 31, 2003 8:30 am

Ok, I was fooling around with the DL4 and this came up...it didn't come out as good when I went to record, but nonetheless, here is a whole new take on the song...enjoy ;)


http://www.cadenzaspell.com/forherver2.mp3





here is a link to the original...

http://www.cadenzaspell.com/forher.mp3
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Unread post by DuMB » Sun Jun 01, 2003 6:28 am

well, i thought that all the parts were there for a nice dissonant (in a good way) piece, but i think the timing between the parts needs closer attention. even though the sounds seemed to go together in a unique way, sometimes they were out of synch, and that caused too much clashing to enjoy... and whatever that knocking on wood sound was, well, that just seemed too random at times.

incidentally, i'm a big big fan of the original "for her". i think you've got a great thing going with that, and although i can understand (and appreciate) you exploring different avenues, the original wins this one, hands down... for now! ;)

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Unread post by firedancer86 » Sun Jun 01, 2003 4:41 pm

Alright, well I appreciate honesty...at least you actually listened right :?

SINCE NOBODY EVEN VOTED IN THE POLL, I GUESS YOU WERE THE FIRST TO LISTEN TO IT :roll:
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Unread post by DustyDave » Mon Jun 02, 2003 5:33 am

I like both versions fire , i don't really know which one to pick

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Unread post by firedancer86 » Wed Jun 04, 2003 8:49 am

1 vote... :roll:
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