Collaboration: Dream Girl (Cello, Guitar, Vocals!)

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Collaboration: Dream Girl (Cello, Guitar, Vocals!)

Unread post by dmbguitar718 » Mon Jul 10, 2006 9:34 pm

This features Ben Pezzner on cello, Miguel Fernandes and his fabulous voice, and myself on guitar.

This turned out great in my opinion. I came up with an acoustic version of Dream Girl over a year ago, recorded this guitar track this winter, then recently sent it to Ben so he could add cello. From there, I sent it to Miguel who added the vocals.

Ben really closes this out well. Listen to 4:28 - 4:32 in the left channel. How beautiful.

Here it is:

http://www.s151305233.onlinehome.us/dreamgirl.mp3
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Unread post by Alazais » Mon Jul 10, 2006 9:56 pm

Wow dude. I enjoy listening to this more then DMB's version..

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Unread post by a1075dd63aa12 » Mon Jul 10, 2006 10:22 pm

wow fellas very impressive, i can say without a doubt i enjoyed that much more then the cut off of stand up.

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Unread post by Nuladion » Mon Jul 10, 2006 10:25 pm

All Star lineup :lol: :D Nice job guys.

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Unread post by onid41 » Mon Jul 10, 2006 10:37 pm

great stuff!! im a fan of all 3 of you, good to hear this colab. keep up the good work
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Unread post by Speenis » Mon Jul 10, 2006 11:17 pm

onid41 wrote:great stuff!! im a fan of all 3 of you, good to hear this colab. keep up the good work
what he said

there have been some amazing collabs in here and this is definitely in the top 5 that I've heard
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Unread post by Buck » Mon Jul 10, 2006 11:19 pm

Awes :shock: me

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Unread post by Blake » Mon Jul 10, 2006 11:32 pm

that was absolutely incredible. wow

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Unread post by markTR » Tue Jul 11, 2006 12:24 am

Awesome. Thanks for that :thumbsup:
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Unread post by mattinbeloit » Tue Jul 11, 2006 1:42 am

wkpggrvn2001 wrote:wow fellas very impressive, i can say without a doubt i enjoyed that much more then the cut off of stand up.
yup.. Miguel, great voice man, keep it up. Guitar was good, cant really say anything negative about it, would love to see a tab. Ben, you are an amazing guy, what can't you play lol. I know from experience how hard it can be to mix in orchestral instruments when you track them like that and don't record them all at once. Not only was that arangment great, but the placement of the different tracks really made the recording and sat in the back and filled in the gaps both musically and image wise and got out there and stood out when need be, really good job. Many times when you don't have many instruments like this the recording can sound dead and have spaces in there and dead space, this was not the case here. One of the best i've seen on here. I would love to hear the wave version if you guys would be willing to ysi it on here or something, I would like to have a copy in a good quality.
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Unread post by BenPezzner » Tue Jul 11, 2006 3:32 am

Thanks for that awesome critique. Props to Pat for the mixing and killer guitar work.

If you want to hear the cello track, I have it temporarily located here: http://www.benpezzner.com/pat

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Unread post by Gold » Tue Jul 11, 2006 4:20 am

Very cool, I'm a fan of you guys too. I listen to your originals on a daily basis.
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Unread post by sfmartins » Tue Jul 11, 2006 6:12 am

I've never heard anything from you guys, and this is awesome!

Everything is great!

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Unread post by Trippin Hillbilly » Tue Jul 11, 2006 9:16 am

Congrats guys, that turned out great. Really good job on the mix Pat.
I wish I could get instrumentals like this sent to me all the time, my job was easy :lol:

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Unread post by Brock » Tue Jul 11, 2006 9:17 am

Trippin Hillbilly wrote:Congrats guys, that turned out great. Really good job on the mix Pat.
I wish I could get instrumentals like this sent to me all the time, my job was easy :lol:
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'twas incredible guys.
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