My first post!!! --"Another Billies Cover"--

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My first post!!! --"Another Billies Cover"--

Unread post by Two Hands » Wed Mar 12, 2003 2:21 pm

hey everyone. ive been using dmbtabs for a long time. first off i have to give props all the mods and contributors on the site, this is a great thing youve got going here, it has helped me a lot as a guitar player.

so since this is my first post i thought id start it off with a little recording. i just downloaded cool edit yesterday and used the mic that was already on my comp so im a little unfamiliar with all of it. I've been playing for about a year now. So let me know what you think...

http://www.angelfire.com/music5/twohands/billiesss.mp3

sorry the link wasnt working before, i fixed it
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Unread post by Two Hands » Wed Mar 12, 2003 2:28 pm

by the way this is not a complete cover... its just the first two verses, forgot to mention that

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Unread post by DustyDave » Wed Mar 12, 2003 2:30 pm

Sounds good to me two hands

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Unread post by Trippin Hillbilly » Wed Mar 12, 2003 4:20 pm

Thats really good man!
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Unread post by Two Hands » Wed Mar 12, 2003 9:17 pm

thanks for the replies guys...

apparently angelfire deleted my account so that link has been dead for a couple hours... so heres one that works, hopefully this one will stay working :D

http://www.angelfire.com/music5/twohands/billiesss.mp3


any constructive criticism on how to improve would be great!

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Unread post by DmbFanJason » Wed Mar 12, 2003 9:30 pm

Two Hands wrote:thanks for the replies guys...

apparently angelfire deleted my account so that link has been dead for a couple hours... so heres one that works, hopefully this one will stay working :D

http://www.angelfire.com/music5/twohands/billiesss.mp3


any constructive criticism on how to improve would be great!
hey bro...I was pretty impressed with this one...you can hit the notes vocally and you have the guitar part down for the most part...there are some rhtyhm issues that I noticed...

the verse: the slide...
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needs more strumming...and I honestly dont know why people hit the 7th fret 5th string during the verse, as I never hear dave hit it, nor have I seen it....to me it just sounds bad and out of place.

The "eat drink and...." part: he only goes back to the
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--5--

every other time...I can't really think of anything else to critique you on because it was very good...The vocals can be improved from practice, but I can tell you have a natural ablility/aptitude with singing..that is if you have never taken lessons of course...lates

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Unread post by Two Hands » Wed Mar 12, 2003 11:49 pm

thanks for the advice man, ill be sure to look into the things you mentioned... about the 7th fret on the 5th string, is that how it is on the site's tab? im just wondering if ive been doing it subconciously this whole time but never actually learned it that way...

and can some one help me with angelfire please? they just shut me down again... and i cant seem to find an explanation from the tutorial or the site

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Unread post by DmbFanJason » Thu Mar 13, 2003 12:19 am

Two Hands wrote:thanks for the advice man, ill be sure to look into the things you mentioned... about the 7th fret on the 5th string, is that how it is on the site's tab? im just wondering if ive been doing it subconciously this whole time but never actually learned it that way...

and can some one help me with angelfire please? they just shut me down again... and i cant seem to find an explanation from the tutorial or the site
the 7th fret 5th string is not tabbed on this site, but it IS tabbed like that on other sites...It's just that I never have heard dave play it that way, and when I hear it in covers, it always sounds weird and out of place...

as far as angelfire, you are on your own...unless someone else has some ideas....lates...

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Unread post by firedancer86 » Thu Mar 13, 2003 8:46 am

My comp at home is still down...so I can't listen to anybody's stuff yet...anywho

Has angelfire given you a reason...did they shut it down, or was it temporarily suspended due to bandwidth...you may just need to decrease the size of your mp3...but you did say that it was only the first 2 verses right...so I'm thinking either adjust your bandwidth, or start a new acount with new information...they wouldn't just shut it down for no reason though...

well welcome to the site, and as soon as I get my CPU back up and running I will be shure to catch up on everybody's covers : )
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Unread post by Two Hands » Thu Mar 13, 2003 11:10 am

yea the mp3 is only 2k, so thats definitely not the problem... it says that i violated terms of the agreement, so im definitely skipping a step or something... i just cant figure it ou

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