My first original song

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My first original song

Unread post by horsmar15 » Sun Nov 09, 2003 6:18 pm

Well, it really isn't my first original, but it is the first original i am posting on this board. Also, it is the first song that I have wrote that I haven't really hated a week after I wrote it :D . The title of the song is change (at least for now until I can think of something better). and i'm still working on my vocals so if they suck ya know why (only been trying to sing for a couple months now). Well, enough of that, give it a listen and tell me what ya think
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Unread post by JacknCoke » Mon Nov 10, 2003 2:36 am

Sounded pretty good, work on them vocals :wink: (not that my cigarette voice is any better)
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Unread post by horsmar15 » Mon Nov 10, 2003 5:58 pm

Oh ya, one thing I forgot to add in the original post. I know my vocals don't sound right, but the thing is I am really not sure how to make them better. Can anyone who listens to any of my recordings, tell me what I am doing wrong and possibly how to fix it. Thanks!
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