New Originals...please let me hear what you guys think

[rampaged.congt]

Hey Guys
Here's my newest song...just wrote it yesterday
It's called "The waves are perfect in my eyes"...almost a whole sentence as a title...but I just thought that's what it had to be.
Anyway...give it a listen and tell me what you think...no matter if pro or con

Thanks,

Mike


Here's the link: http://www.angelfire.com/jazz/rampaged. ... ilaway.mp3

[rampaged.congt]

And here's yet another one of my songs.

I got to manage to upload this one just now so check it out...

http://www.angelfire.com/jazz/rampaged. ... phover.mp3

You can find the song describtions here:
http://www.angelfire.com/jazz/rampaged.congtx/

[fatjack]

both of the songs progression were rather bland. the second song was played quite well, but the first song's rhythm was rather weak and didn't really work well with one guitar.

the good news is that your voice is pretty good, you had very solid melodies that were rather interesting. except you did steal part of 41 in your second song, the little la la part was the exact same

the first one i would give a 5 out of ten, and the second one would get a 6.5.

despite the way these scores look, you did well. the highest i've given is an 8.5