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The Man of The Hour
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Unread post by The Man of The Hour » Mon Jul 07, 2003 5:57 pm

http://www.angelfire.com/musicals/tunes4/music.html

Shaky guitar at some parts, mostly shaky vocals. How is it?

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Unread post by firedancer86 » Mon Jul 07, 2003 6:15 pm

sounding great...making progress every day huh? :)

keep it up...I especially like the intro...

clean up some spots, and you are ready to gig :lol:


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Unread post by Trippin Hillbilly » Mon Jul 07, 2003 7:09 pm

Damn dude....the passion intro-> the verse sounds really smooth....great work!

You've got a cool voice too! Definately got some soul.....just sounds like need to get a bit a more air flowing from your gut ..

Nicely done...smooth out the rough bits and you're set.

Good work :D

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Unread post by IronMike778 » Thu Jul 10, 2003 9:18 am

Is this your first post? I've been away for a while and don't remember hearing you before.........

I thought the passion intro was fantastic :D .......I really don't think you could improve on that part...real nice.

The rest of the song sounded good (maybe a bit rushed?) and the vocals were solid........nice job TMOTH.

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