Original - As It Seems

[HumbleMonkey]

havent posted anything in a while but ive been working on stuff, here is a little song called


http://download.yousendit.com/21F6E82F4774C1D7


As It Seems


You can paint anything you want to make you some kind of happy
There’s three other directions you can look to turn away from the bad
And in seeming there seems to be something always missing
You gave away everything that you once had

Only memories are what support your thought foundations
You’ve got nothing to go by but what you were once told
Won’t you let jack out of the box, he’s grown claustrophobic
And eternity is afraid of getting old

The trapeze artist keeps his balance on a footstool
As he brushes his teeth each and everyday
Just like the accountant his fate lies in the hands of precision
Through failure he becomes more human in each and every way

Last chance to make all your investments for the future
Tomorrow only matters when today is no where to be found
Just like the wind we are all flying somewhere
I’m flying with both feet firmly planted on the ground

[6_strings_for_life]

very bob dylan ish.. but there is obvouusly nothing wrong with that. Im only two minutes into the song and im already very tired of the guitar part. The lyrics are kinda neat although they dont seem to have any common ground with eachother, kinda rambleish. I do like the like the line ' and eternoty is afraid of getting old'. Ok i just got the the harmonica part and that sounds pretty good. nice song, thanks for posting.

[marcusvpais]

its like bob dylan + calm banjo

i love the "gaita" i dont know how to speak in english but is the other instrument other than the guitar.