some new songs

[HumbleMonkey]

i have some song ideas ive been playing with. they are different from what i normally write. not gonna lie, i smoked up, grabbed an electric guitar and recorded these. the recordings arent that good, my electric guitar is a piece, but the songs come across fine, they are very raw, very messy especially on these recorings, i made up lots of the lyrics right on the spot so your gonna here some bad stuff.

so basically i want to know if they are ok, especially from people who know my other stuff, what do you like better? and i dont need anything too specific in each song because they arent meant to be perfect, but mention if there is anything you like

these are all gonna be with a band

not sure about titles yet

Original 1 (what will become of you and me)
http://www.sendspace.com/file/hv9x68

Original 2 (no idea)
http://www.sendspace.com/file/txmqc3

Original 3 (when the moon)
http://www.sendspace.com/file/3149of

Original 4 (run away)
http://www.sendspace.com/file/crscjk

Original 5 (long lost friend)
http://www.sendspace.com/file/i052uj


thanks for anyone taking the time

[mangold]

a little weed and an electric pretty quickly kills your nice folksey style.

stick with your other style imo. it may not have been my favorite style, but it was your style. i would refine it. I havent found my style yet.