New Song...rip it apart if you have too...lol

USMCOCS · Unread post by **USMCOCS** » Fri Apr 14, 2006 10:58 am

Hey guys....I got a song I just recorded I was hoping someone or some people could give me a little bit of feedback as to what they think of it.....

thanks

http://www.myspace.com/62265212

ut4ever8 · Unread post by **ut4ever8** » Fri Apr 14, 2006 11:05 am

i like it

jellyfish · Unread post by **jellyfish** » Fri Apr 14, 2006 11:06 am

Very, very, nice voice. Guitar was solid too.

Good song.

However, there wasn't too much variation throughout the song.

MOE.PHISH · Unread post by **MOE.PHISH** » Fri Apr 14, 2006 3:26 pm

i agree great song great voice. my only critiques...like peaver said a littler more variation would be great.

I want to say the first 30 seconds you had the same vocal pattern over your chords, you could mix it up a little bit. such as where you say "but i can learn".. maybe if u separated it like "but maybe iiii can learn" just throwing in a few more words instead of having a steady pattern would help ur variance. just my opinion what do i know! awesome song

douge006 · Unread post by **douge006** » Fri Apr 14, 2006 3:38 pm

jellyfish wrote:Very, very, nice voice. Guitar was solid too.

Good song.

However, there wasn't too much variation throughout the song.

lyrics101 · Unread post by **lyrics101** » Sat Apr 15, 2006 3:30 am

Bored about a minute into it.

RunsWithBuffalo · Unread post by **RunsWithBuffalo** » Sat Apr 15, 2006 12:42 pm

I like this a lot, your voice is great and your guitar playing is very rythmic.

I agree variation would help but i wouldnt change the tune. What you have in an acoustic shell of what could be a great song. Just add other intruments to spice it up. Even some little guitar fills would be awesome.

Great job man

6_strings_for_life · Unread post by **6_strings_for_life** » Sat Apr 15, 2006 6:44 pm

the quality of this is great and your voice is also great. I agree with the others, it does get boring, but you have the begining of what would be an awesome song. Keep up the good work and thanks for posting.

eliot1171 · Unread post by **eliot1171** » Sun Apr 16, 2006 9:33 am

DMBTabs.com; Welcome to it.

I must agree that I didn't feel a large enough transition between the verse and chorus. Voice was good and quality of the recording was good also.

Please keep posting. :thumbsup:

New Song...rip it apart if you have too...lol

New Song...rip it apart if you have too...lol

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