Blues Improv in F

[Tranman66]

I am trying to get down the blues cuz i think i think its essential to know how to solo, and a good way to start is with the blues.

So this is a short 2 min improv i recorded, with a D minor in the background.

I need tips and critiques and soloing and techniques. Thanks so much!

http://s39.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=0QI2 ... RQ1LC6V8K4

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http://s65.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=2VMQ ... 1U80X2BKYG

[Cor]

A few bends fall short of the target pitch. It seems kind of aimless, but it's not bad. What I do when I feel my solos wandering is sing what I want to play. It really helps me focus and usually I can establish a new melody or motif or whatever.

Good start.