song my brother and I wrote.

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dmb_rulz
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song my brother and I wrote.

Unread post by dmb_rulz » Wed Jan 04, 2006 4:38 pm

This is a song my brother and I wrote he is the one singing. We both are playing guitar.



http://d63.yousendit.com/D/18I6T8R70W39 ... ceedit.mp3
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Unread post by dmb_rulz » Wed Jan 04, 2006 4:43 pm

that link was broken lets try again

http://s53.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=17VN ... 69O2B3RAXV
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Unread post by dmb_rulz » Wed Jan 04, 2006 4:53 pm

Anyway hope you like it still trying to learn how to use the recording stuff I have :)
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Unread post by Cor » Wed Jan 04, 2006 6:02 pm

Nice catchy little tune. Reminds me of good 90s pop. There's a little pop or something as the vocals come in.

I like it.
-Love Hogs
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Unread post by dmb_rulz » Wed Jan 04, 2006 8:41 pm

Thanks very much I wish he lived closer we would make more songs. He lives in ga and moving to keywest fla. I live all the way up here in ohio :( I brought my multi recorder with me when I went to vist him.
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Unread post by dmb_rulz » Fri Jan 06, 2006 3:47 pm

Also feel to do any critiquing on the song. :) Thanks so much for those or heard it. :)
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Unread post by jellyfish » Fri Jan 06, 2006 4:28 pm

I'm listening to it now. I like it very much, but it's hard to differentiate the Verse/Bridge/Chorus. That would be my only problem with it. [and that's not a problem]

The vocals were good.
Guitar was really low -->Turn it up a bit.

It reminded me of Jack Johnson.
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Unread post by dmb_rulz » Fri Jan 06, 2006 5:10 pm

Yes I have told my brother that many times he sounds like jack johnson. :)
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Unread post by Dacoe » Tue Jan 10, 2006 9:50 pm

I really like it. I'm a big fan of JJ, so yeah, this is awesome, haha. I really hope you guys get to do more stuff soon enough. 8-)
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Unread post by dmb_rulz » Wed Jan 11, 2006 3:08 pm

Thanks so much if i go visit him in keywest I will be sure to bring my multi track recorder :)
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