Please Critique My Neon Verse

jsgksu · Unread post by **jsgksu** » Tue Apr 22, 2003 5:58 pm

So Ive been practicing this song for a while, its very rough and by no means perfect, I just wanna know if Im playing it the right way. I dont wanna learn it the wrong way or something, so just listen to it and tell me if it sounds like Im on the right track, thanks.

http://www.angelfire.com/oh5/jsgksu/

firedancer86 · Unread post by **firedancer86** » Tue Apr 22, 2003 6:08 pm

you see, i told you that it isn't that hard! :lol:

Sounds great dude...iron out some kinks and get a flow going and you will have it down in no time :wink:

jsgksu · Unread post by **jsgksu** » Tue Apr 22, 2003 6:15 pm

Yeah, I mess up always once or twice each time I go through the verse, my main problem is that last chord change, its really fast. Ive been working at it for awhile, hopefully I can get those kinks out soon. Then I can work on the rest of the song, which doesnt look any easier.

jsgksu · Unread post by **jsgksu** » Tue Apr 22, 2003 6:17 pm

BTW, thanks for listening

gravedigger · Unread post by **gravedigger** » Tue Apr 22, 2003 8:36 pm

whoever pulls of Neon, has my respect as guitar player. it takes forever for me to download with this dial up connection but I'm gonna try. I don't think I heard anything from you yet jsgksu. is this the first thing you recorded?

jsgksu · Unread post by **jsgksu** » Tue Apr 22, 2003 8:43 pm

This is only 45 seconds or so, so it shouldnt take very long. I didnt exactly pull it off that great so save your praise. I did a cover of Warehouse a little while ago, its still up on my site but its a pretty big file and I really dont think it reflects my best efforts either. So probably not worth getting for you. But listen to Neon and let me know what you think. Im gonna start posting more covers soon though soon as school is over, 3 weeks. So youll be hearing more of me soon.

gravedigger · Unread post by **gravedigger** » Tue Apr 22, 2003 9:03 pm

jsgksu wrote:This is only 45 seconds or so, so it shouldnt take very long. I didnt exactly pull it off that great so save your praise. I did a cover of Warehouse a little while ago, its still up on my site but its a pretty big file and I really dont think it reflects my best efforts either. So probably not worth getting for you. But listen to Neon and let me know what you think. Im gonna start posting more covers soon though soon as school is over, 3 weeks. So youll be hearing more of me soon.

ok I just listened to it. it sounds like your timing is on and the tempo is just right. how long have you practiced it before you recorded it? sounds like your missing a few of the higher picked notes but that'll come. good luck with the rest of it, man.

jsgksu · Unread post by **jsgksu** » Tue Apr 22, 2003 9:12 pm

Well I had tried it before but never seriously cuz I thought it was impossible. But when fire put up his version like two weeks ago I started actually trying to learn it. Since then Ive been trying it and it seemed to be coming together the best today so I recorded it. As for missing a few of the higher notes I realize that but when I play it perfect I play them I just havent been able to play it perfect very consistently. I am actually trying to play them but either I miss them with my right hand or just dont get there quick enough with my left. I have the tab and know how to play its just so damn fast/hard. Hopefully sometime soon Ill be able to make the transitions quicker and get the right hand down. Thanks for taking the time to d/l it on good old dial-up and for listening.

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