a lil riff

[T1nM4n]

ok this si jstu a lil thing i was messing around with, i did 2 guitar parts but if uthink the 2nd one sounds bad jsut ignore it and tell me what you thing of the main part, its jsut two differnt riffs, somethign that could be a verse and a chorus or something like that, let me know what you think please

http://s38.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=2CHU ... 4VE9ZZX6PE

[i am sam2]

not bad, pretty davish which i like. a little chopy at parts but i got the gist of it being played perfectly...i liked it. second guitar was off though

[T1nM4n]

not bad, pretty davish which i like. a little chopy at parts but i got the gist of it being played perfectly...i liked it. second guitar was off though

i dont like the 2nd guitasr much myself either but i threw it in there for kicks mostly, i sjut need to think of words, any ideas for a theme?

[i am sam2]

not bad, pretty davish which i like. a little chopy at parts but i got the gist of it being played perfectly...i liked it. second guitar was off though

i dont like the 2nd guitasr much myself either but i threw it in there for kicks mostly, i sjut need to think of words, any ideas for a theme?

something light. i dont think anything about heartbreak, death, torture, etc. would be appropriate. but it doesnt make me think sunny day either...how about a nice white snow?

[T1nM4n]

well it would help if it was snowing out, cuz i wrote a pretty cool song about a arainstorm once, might as well keep with the season thing, maybe ill think of sumthing

[T1nM4n]

anyone else?

[Kahn]

cool riff

write about aliens

[T1nM4n]

aliens, nice

[Elliottman]

Hey i liked that allot. As said earlier very Dave like.
Someone also said it doesnt remind them of a sunny day, well, i think it does. The verse anyways. Nice i liked it.

[dancingnancie28]

I like the first riff a lot. I think you could turn this into a very awesome song.