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first lyrics

Unread post by STLflmmkr » Thu Jul 07, 2005 8:40 pm

hey guys i just want some input at my first attempt at lyrics.

my hearts become cloudy
difficult to see
i fear this is near ending
feelings i have in me

my hearts become tired
walking this road alone
where once you stood beside me
I walk on my own

my hearts become broken
from things youve said
how can i get over this
clear my head of you

when my own worst obsession...my own worst obsession is you
youve dug yourself deep
into my into my brain
controlling every thought
flowing in my veins
how can i escape this
prison that youve made
when my own worst obsession..my own worst obsession is you

my eyes can see clearly
damage that youve done
is there an escape
from this maze ive begun

my eyes can see through you
Truths you hide inside
Have I ever known you
All the times that you've lied

My eyes begin to burn
from tears you've made me cry
I've got nothing left to give
Is it time for goodbye

when my own worst obsession...my own worst obsession is you
youve dug yourself deep
into my into my brain
controlling every thought
flowing in my veins
how can i escape this
prison that youve made
when my own worst obsession..my own worst obsession is you

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