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Unread post by Nitro1515 » Tue Jul 05, 2005 11:09 am

This is just a little riff I made up a couple months ago, still trying to come up with some sort of a breakdown or bridge for it. Anyway, the recording isn't high quality because all I have is a desktop mic, but let me know what you think.

http://www.archive.org/download/GianniN ... 3__Mp3.mp3
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Unread post by waffle_house_jam » Tue Jul 05, 2005 11:53 am

Sounds pretty good. Reminds me of So Damn Lucky, not in a 'you ripped the song off' way though. I think a big rhythm change would be good to break it up a bit, in the bridge or whatever.
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Unread post by Nitro1515 » Wed Jul 06, 2005 11:29 am

waffle_house_jam wrote:Sounds pretty good. Reminds me of So Damn Lucky, not in a 'you ripped the song off' way though. I think a big rhythm change would be good to break it up a bit, in the bridge or whatever.
Yeah its just as simple as SDL is, I used B tuning for it. I really do need to toss in a change of pace somewhere in there like you said. Thanks for responding, anybody else listen to this? I would love to hear some more thoughts.
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Unread post by Kahn » Wed Jul 06, 2005 12:13 pm

I like it, it sounds good. Post this again when you finish :thumbsup:
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Unread post by mrjones » Wed Jul 06, 2005 12:40 pm

first off good riff, i couldnt do better

but i do think the first part of it sounds a lot like SDL. a lot of similarties
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