Time for another song :)

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Rowlf
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Time for another song :)

Unread post by Rowlf » Mon May 16, 2005 9:32 am

hello, people!

here's a reworked version of one of my older songs ... it's got a kind of RnB groove to it, so beware :)

TIA for listening!

http://users.pandora.be/Luyckx/Tricks%2 ... 20Tori.mp3
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Unread post by T1nM4n » Mon May 16, 2005 10:17 am

very nice, i like the use of some of the percusian and the "RnB groove" works well for this song, i wish i could try to critique this in some way but its way better than anything i could prolly ever imagine of doing, but i really like this one Good job
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Unread post by Rowlf » Tue May 17, 2005 3:23 pm

thanks for listening T1nM4n!

and the rest of you : for shaaaame! :o)

is there anyone else out there willing to give an opinion on this song ?
I'd really appreciate it, thanks!
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Unread post by topgun17 » Thu May 19, 2005 9:05 pm

nice job my friend
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Unread post by markTR » Wed Jun 08, 2005 6:04 pm

pretty good man. i dig the guitar and the percussion

it seems like you could maybe add a little more to the vocals, but you got a solid voice and overall a solid song

good work
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