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Its amazing what the right girl will do for you.

Unread post by Teego Time » Wed Dec 22, 2004 7:28 pm

Seriously, I've never been this lyrically inspired before. And I owe it all to one pain in the ass of a girl. :lol:

Here's some lyrics to another song I wrote. Havan't quite picked out a title yet, and YES I KNOW ITS NOT ORIGIONAL, AND YES I KNOW ITS CLICHE. Haha, just though't i'd share with ya'll since most of you are pretty cool....

ON ANOTHER NOTE:

So I don't have a guitar with a pickup, any suggestions as to what kind of hardware/software I'll need to start recording my stuff. I want it to sound decent, but nothing crazy. And yes, I'm on a VERY limited budged.


Oh here's the lyrics:

(Verse1)
It’s a crime to keep something alive
That already is dead

There’s a place for things that come to be
Broken and sad

There’s a book to read when you can’t sleep
And I’m guessing you can’t

But there’s no place to run and hide when you’re
Reeling in my mind

(Chorus1)
It’s all going down
I’m taken over
You’re taking over me

And my mind is sick
With the thoughts
And the memories

Won’t you leave me now?
Take away
And just let me be

But you’re unfinished here
As you must
Continue to haunt me

(Verse2)
So now that we’ve covered the obvious
We’ll face what we can’t see

And I’m not alone because I have you
Constantly following me

Haunting my every step, every move
You’re presence, it numbs me

And I can’t feel my skin anymore
My clouds of breath can be seen

(Chorus 2)
It’s all going down
You’re taking over me

And my mind is sick
With the memories

Won’t you leave me now?
And just let me be

But you’re unfinished here
As you must
Continue to haunt me

(Ending Shits)
I guess it’s more than clear that you’ve made yourself
Finally I can see

So I’ll be going now thinking of you
And constantly questioning me

If you want to find me here
I’ll be fighting you

Fighting to
Relinquish you
From my memories


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Unread post by i like tictacs » Wed Dec 22, 2004 7:39 pm

Better then half the crap I see on here all the time. Nice.
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Unread post by deceptivehero » Thu Dec 23, 2004 3:23 pm

I can hear the flow of lyrics the way I read them but I'd like to hear the lyrics put to some music to see what you were thinking. Good stuff though.
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Unread post by Teego Time » Thu Dec 23, 2004 3:56 pm

You guys are going to love this...


So I wrote my song, sang it and played it JUST how I wanted it.


Ate dinner.



Completely forgot the rythem and timing I used. Son of a bitch...


Don't worry though, after X-mas, Ima see if I can go pick up some recording equipment to post for you guys.

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Unread post by serialwired » Mon Dec 27, 2004 10:38 am

Teego Time wrote:You guys are going to love this...


So I wrote my song, sang it and played it JUST how I wanted it.


Ate dinner.



Completely forgot the rythem and timing I used. Son of a bitch...


Don't worry though, after X-mas, Ima see if I can go pick up some recording equipment to post for you guys.
That happens to me all the time, it's such a pain in the ass. So what I do, is I have this shitty little 1970s tape deck that I keep handy, and when I hear something I like, I just hit record and go from there. Even if it sucks, I have much more of a template then if I just try and remember it... You know, pot will do that to you. :D
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