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jlee762000
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by jlee762000 » Fri Dec 10, 2004 10:43 am
OK thanks guys for all your tips and advice here's another one but I was kinda hoping this time ya'll could offer some chords that sound really cool kinda like the one on the 3.26.03 soundcheck which you can get from ants marching.....it would go verse..chorus..verse...chorus...verse...bridge..chorus...outro
any lyrical thoughts would be great as well...thanks JON
Chasing
Standing here today
wishing I could see ya
justa stone throw away
yearning to be yours
Sun splashes down
wasting the hours
diggin this hole
all round this town
big enough for u to fall
crazy u make me
words i try but
they all fumble and stumble
you stole my mind
swallowed me whole
so much to say
but im wasting time
chasing the words
if i could only say
whats swimming inside
Chorus:
so i'll just keep
diggin this hole
all round this town
til its big enough
for you to fall
keep diggin this hole
wash these dirty hands
so you can see me
keep diggin til
its you i imbibe
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Tranman66
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by Tranman66 » Fri Dec 10, 2004 1:16 pm
post a recording man. lyrics is nothing without music.
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by jlee762000 » Fri Dec 10, 2004 2:04 pm
well that the thing i need some help with making chords for this song.....something similiar to that of the 3.26.03 soundcheck if you havent heard it its on ants under audio downloads
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