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Unread post by nancies21 » Sun Mar 02, 2003 12:35 pm

What's up....I don't like how i said the intro ...."come and see" but the rest sounds normal i think...anyway...enjoy

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Unread post by eclektik_rhythmz » Sun Mar 02, 2003 12:52 pm

Well man i think the guitar was good with a little loss of rhythm and some notes really smacked hard but regardless the song IS TIGHT MUSICALLY.

Vocally man is seemed like is was a strain for ya at times and also the lyrics seemed to be getting ahead of u at times.

OVERALL Good job its a tough tune to sing right and play with that right amount of finess
SO a little more practice u could be much better.

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Unread post by DustyDave » Sun Mar 02, 2003 9:08 pm

The intro had a couple bad notes but its ok , lets face it , we're not perfect :)

And as you said so yourself , the opening words were like a little uhmmm dead compared to the rest , but else it was good :)

Keep them coming , i like your covers

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Unread post by The Man of The Hour » Sun Mar 02, 2003 10:46 pm

Love it. You kicked the chorus' ass man. Very difficult song vocally, especially if one doesn't a deep voice like dave, and has to get up into falsetto. Awesome job :D

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Unread post by nancies21 » Mon Mar 03, 2003 7:37 pm

ha yeah about the intro..that chord always gets me..cause i always pull my first finger down too far and accidently press on the B and e strings..so it adds that shitty dingy sound...sorry bout that.....but ya thanks ya'll

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