My seek up cover

dpresti · Unread post by **dpresti** » Tue Oct 26, 2004 1:45 pm

let me know ya'll think.. one of my 1st recordings... not perfect but its something..

http://s5.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=7F183 ... 3BFEE293CB

mbgreen · Unread post by **mbgreen** » Tue Oct 26, 2004 1:48 pm

you might want to convert that to mp3. Its in .wav right now, and its 36megs. Wayyyyyyyyy too big. I don't know who you host through, but you'll run out of transfer space quick on that.

dpresti · Unread post by **dpresti** » Tue Oct 26, 2004 1:58 pm

what can i use to convert this baby?

mbgreen · Unread post by **mbgreen** » Tue Oct 26, 2004 2:12 pm

mkw is free and works well...you can select SHN, WAV, MKW, and MP3 formats. Get it here from etree:

http://www.etree.org/mkw.html

If you need help, pm me or hit me up on aim. I can convert it for you if you can't firgure this stuff out.

mlb1399 · Unread post by **mlb1399** » Tue Oct 26, 2004 2:15 pm

Alright, is that something that can be used to get .shn files to play?

dpresti · Unread post by **dpresti** » Tue Oct 26, 2004 2:20 pm

mp3

http://s14.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=3F91 ... B61CC29DF8

mbgreen · Unread post by **mbgreen** » Tue Oct 26, 2004 2:39 pm

ok, I'm listening as I type.

The beginning, the fall back part...youre trying to sound like dave. Use your natural voice.

The verses sound pretty good...again, I hear you trying to twist your voice to sound like dave at times though. The vocs could use some more emotion arounnd the five minute mark. I don't hear much.

Ok, don't take this the wrong way, its constructive criticism...but your second guitar track was pretty bad from the 4:20 mark on. It was off rythmically, and it sounded cluttered.

Your voice has a lot of potential...don't be afraid to let it loose. Work a bit more on getting things clean, and you'll be in good shape. Nice job man. Seek up isn't the easiest song to do.

dpresti · Unread post by **dpresti** » Tue Oct 26, 2004 2:42 pm

thanks mike.. i agree with everything your saying...

i've only been playing for a year so thats why my 2nd guitar part is way off... i knew that but oh well.. and i need to start singing natrually..

DMBartender · Unread post by **DMBartender** » Thu Oct 28, 2004 12:44 am

he's right about the fall back part, he is also right in saying that your voice has a lot of potential. im curious, did you use looping in that recording?

dpresti · Unread post by **dpresti** » Thu Oct 28, 2004 6:27 am

no, no loops

Swe dmbfan · Unread post by **Swe dmbfan** » Thu Oct 28, 2004 7:15 am

dont work for me..

dpresti · Unread post by **dpresti** » Thu Oct 28, 2004 8:28 am

dont work for you?

what doesnt work for you?

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