IT's A COMBO...HOLY MACKERAL!!!!!!!!!!!!

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IT's A COMBO...HOLY MACKERAL!!!!!!!!!!!!

Unread post by DmbFanJason » Fri Feb 28, 2003 10:01 pm

In the Carehouse, don't you love to stay....

Cause I am the Waptain of this ship!!!

lemme know mofos!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
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Unread post by DustyDave » Sat Mar 01, 2003 1:31 am

I liked it , except for one big thing though , drop the wannabee dave speak , it doesn't fit in the Jason ....

I really think your voice fits in very well on Captain though :)

At 2:20 when its running the intro of Warehouse , you make a couple strums , which sounds very bad , whats up with that ? And why is there only vocals during the chorus part ? Besides that its good

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Unread post by DmbFanJason » Sat Mar 01, 2003 1:35 am

well, that part i was just fuckin around...so i just strummed the whole guitar openly...so what did you think about the stop time intro...i hardly ever practice that, as i like red rocks intro version much better...so what did yall think about the vocals on this one?? any suggestions....


when you say the vocals went well with captain, did you mean they were decent, good, really good, etc.?

thanks for the reply dustydave...late

all comments are welcome.......

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Unread post by DustyDave » Sat Mar 01, 2003 1:43 am

Ok well the open chords didn't fit in ;)

The time stop intro was very nice , and what i ment by " Vocals went well with Captain " i ment that they were good ..

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Unread post by DmbFanJason » Sat Mar 01, 2003 1:49 am

opening chords to captain?

what about warehouse vocals?

well...what made them not "great"...suggest something.....

all comments are welcome.......

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Unread post by DustyDave » Sat Mar 01, 2003 1:52 am

I didn't say OPENING CHORDS i said OPEN CHORDS , the ones you do on the time stop intro , they sounded horrible as they didn't fit in anywhere lol

The Warehouse vocals could need a little tweaking , like putting a little more feel into them , and you should do all the vocals and not just the chorus part .

But all in all it was yet another cool cover

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Unread post by DmbFanJason » Sat Mar 01, 2003 1:55 am

hey thanks...on warehouse i did hold a little back because I didnt want to wake the neighbors....they must fuckin loathe dave matthews music by now...lol....thanks for the reply..late

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Unread post by DustyDave » Sat Mar 01, 2003 2:11 am

Well they should , they don't know what they are missing if they don't lol

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Unread post by juineaux » Sat Mar 01, 2003 2:12 am

I like your voice on this alot better than TB. I think everyone, except Tico, had trouble with the vocals on TB.

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Unread post by DmbFanJason » Sat Mar 01, 2003 4:46 pm

thank yall...anyone else want to comment on this yet another glorious day that the lord gave us?

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Unread post by eclektik_rhythmz » Sat Mar 01, 2003 5:09 pm

Your rhythm is off during captain completely at 1:25 and other points during the song. And the vocals on captain need work, off key a good bit but i think with practice the vocals could work with the exception of around 1:40. u start do howl and the pitch is off.

Warehouse opening is a little shaky. Too much pitch scratchin as well. Dave doesn't sound like that. And again u lose rhythm throughout the choruses and bridges. the vocals especially on Louie, Louie were quite off. U stumble through the section beginning with "that's our blood in there" could never understand what u said.

What was that thing after warehouse it sounded like garbage.

Overall Captain was a decent attempt but needs vocal work and warehouse could be way better and stop with the DAVE SPEAK!!

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Unread post by DmbFanJason » Sat Mar 01, 2003 5:33 pm

OK dyslexic rhythm....off at 1:25 and "other" parts...lets see you name them...huh?...telling me about the thing at the end shows me at least you got to the end....

LOL, when I listened to your WWYS "own-style" cover, I turned it off after about 25 secs...I couldnt take it anymore...Some guy sent it to me saying..."hey check it out, this guy is good"...so I was like.."ok, I'll check it out"....So I listened...it turned out it was all a big fuckin joke...thats pretty bad bro....

This cover was me just fuckin around, but you sure did seem to go with it every little but you could...

I would love to hear you play and sing a DMB cover...one that won't make me cringe within 30 seconds...

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Unread post by eclektik_rhythmz » Sat Mar 01, 2003 6:50 pm

here ya go JASON

I posted an old cover of recently!

I found it on a minidisc from a few months ago.

http://www.nowhereradio.com/artists/alb ... 31&alid=-1

Cheers,
J.T.

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Unread post by michaelb14 » Sun Mar 02, 2003 12:09 am

eclektik_rhythmz wrote:here ya go JASON

I posted an old cover of recently!

I found it on a minidisc from a few months ago.

http://www.nowhereradio.com/artists/alb ... 31&alid=-1

Cheers,
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Did'nt see your recently cover but I liked the other stuff, you have a cool sounding voice. I thought murky waters was really cool, a little rough in places but cool.
"One Sweet World around this star is spinnin, One Sweet World and in her breath we're swimmin"

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