Major Improvement on ants marching let me know.

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Unread post by mbent4679 » Thu Feb 01, 2007 8:55 pm

Just wanted to put it on top so people know it's here.

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Unread post by sups08 » Thu Feb 01, 2007 11:17 pm

MUCH BETTER!

Just, um, well, uh.. I would slow it down some, and work on singing with the rhythm, it's kinda choppy.

But, not too bad. There are some parts where your voice actually sounds pretty good.

Just keep playin' dawg.

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Unread post by iha » Fri Feb 02, 2007 2:04 am

yeah, still way too fast IMO.

still need to work on the vocals.

the guitar and the vocals seem choppy, and it's kind of awkward. (maybe it's because you're not too comfortable playing/singing at the same time? not really sure)

i would say slightly better, but no "major" improvements.

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Unread post by mbent4679 » Fri Feb 02, 2007 8:51 am

iha wrote:yeah, still way too fast IMO.

still need to work on the vocals.

the guitar and the vocals seem choppy, and it's kind of awkward. (maybe it's because you're not too comfortable playing/singing at the same time? not really sure)

i would say slightly better, but no "major" improvements.
For some reason ants has been the hard for me. It's not the guitar it's the vocals. I can do trippin billies (even though it's esteemed one of the harder dave songs) cause of the simple melody line. I've been practicing since then and my voice tends to hit the high notes more naturally now. I'll post it agian when I think I'm done. wanna add more licks too :D . thnx for the feedback.

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