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Unread post by hofdaddy » Mon Jan 22, 2007 3:22 pm

Those lyrics look straight hi jacked from Pink Floyd
Give a woman an inch and she'll take a foot. Give a woman a foot and she'll moan like a whore

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Unread post by a1075dd63aa12 » Mon Jan 22, 2007 3:23 pm

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wkpggrvn2001 wrote:
mbent4679 wrote:
Kahn wrote:I think the line "Is there anybody out there" was made pretty famous by Pink Floyd. I would change it.
What if I changed it to

"is there anybody up there."
BINGO!!! I like it...Go with it!
Sarcasm? Is it to close to the original?
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Unread post by mbent4679 » Mon Jan 22, 2007 3:23 pm

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Kahn wrote:Dave uses that nursery rhyme in Gravedigger
damn thats where it was from.
ughhh your right I'm gunna break out my mother goose book now.
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Unread post by Kahn » Mon Jan 22, 2007 3:25 pm

Or... instead of copying a nursery rhyme, you could write lyrics.
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Unread post by mbent4679 » Mon Jan 22, 2007 3:25 pm

hofdaddy wrote:Those lyrics look straight hi jacked from Pink Floyd
Didn't mean to
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Unread post by a1075dd63aa12 » Mon Jan 22, 2007 3:27 pm

mbent4679 wrote:
wkpggrvn2001 wrote:
Kahn wrote:Dave uses that nursery rhyme in Gravedigger
damn thats where it was from.
ughhh your right I'm gunna break out my mother goose book now.
:thumbsup: :thumbsup:

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Unread post by mbent4679 » Mon Jan 22, 2007 3:27 pm

Kahn wrote:Or... instead of copying a nursery rhyme, you could write lyrics.
I used it to add a folk feel to it. I have seen many songwriters do it. but in this situation mabye I'll come up with my own.
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Unread post by hofdaddy » Mon Jan 22, 2007 3:27 pm

mbent4679 wrote:
hofdaddy wrote:Those lyrics look straight hi jacked from Pink Floyd
Didn't mean to
You've been listening to a lot of Pink Floyd lately haven't you?
Give a woman an inch and she'll take a foot. Give a woman a foot and she'll moan like a whore

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Unread post by mbent4679 » Mon Jan 22, 2007 3:32 pm

Kahn wrote:I think the line "Is there anybody out there" was made pretty famous by Pink Floyd. I would change it.
The actual line is there anybody in there.
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Unread post by mbent4679 » Mon Jan 22, 2007 3:34 pm

hofdaddy wrote:
mbent4679 wrote:
hofdaddy wrote:Those lyrics look straight hi jacked from Pink Floyd
Didn't mean to
You've been listening to a lot of Pink Floyd lately haven't you?
No, I honestly haven't listen to them in years.
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Unread post by a1075dd63aa12 » Mon Jan 22, 2007 3:42 pm

mbent4679 wrote:
Kahn wrote:I think the line "Is there anybody out there" was made pretty famous by Pink Floyd. I would change it.
The actual line is there anybody in there.
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Unread post by a1075dd63aa12 » Mon Jan 22, 2007 3:43 pm

mbent4679 wrote:
hofdaddy wrote:
mbent4679 wrote:
hofdaddy wrote:Those lyrics look straight hi jacked from Pink Floyd
Didn't mean to
You've been listening to a lot of Pink Floyd lately haven't you?
No, I honestly haven't listen to them in years.
yea hof, why dont you back off and stop accusing people of shit!
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Unread post by hofdaddy » Mon Jan 22, 2007 3:45 pm

wkpggrvn2001 wrote:
mbent4679 wrote:
hofdaddy wrote:
mbent4679 wrote:
hofdaddy wrote:Those lyrics look straight hi jacked from Pink Floyd
Didn't mean to
You've been listening to a lot of Pink Floyd lately haven't you?
No, I honestly haven't listen to them in years.
yea hof, why dont you back off and stop accusing people of shit!
step away from the keyboard and give your dick beaters a rest before they get you into trouble Bobby.
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Unread post by Speenis » Mon Jan 22, 2007 3:46 pm

mbent4679 wrote:
Kahn wrote:I think the line "Is there anybody out there" was made pretty famous by Pink Floyd. I would change it.
The actual line is there anybody in there.
wrong again!

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Is_There_A ... t_There%3F
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Unread post by a1075dd63aa12 » Mon Jan 22, 2007 3:47 pm

hofdaddy wrote:
wkpggrvn2001 wrote:
mbent4679 wrote:
hofdaddy wrote:
mbent4679 wrote:
hofdaddy wrote:Those lyrics look straight hi jacked from Pink Floyd
Didn't mean to
You've been listening to a lot of Pink Floyd lately haven't you?
No, I honestly haven't listen to them in years.
yea hof, why dont you back off and stop accusing people of shit!
step away from the keyboard and give your dick beaters a rest before they get you into trouble Bobby.
no way, this guy comes in here, with something original and different and you compare him to one of the shittiest bands ever. you step away!
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