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Unread post by jaroben » Thu Apr 28, 2005 3:25 am

good guitar. not bad voice... could be louder. seems like you're struggling to get your voice out. good cover overall.
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Unread post by Kahn » Thu Apr 28, 2005 3:47 pm

thanks brotha
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Unread post by mattinbeloit » Fri Apr 29, 2005 7:02 pm

ya you have a good voice man, the guitar is nice to. I don't know about the birds, it's alright it just made me laugh on first listen... But none the less good touch, i like the off key into, nice idea.
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Unread post by Kahn » Fri Apr 29, 2005 7:05 pm

birds are because i had my window open while I was recording. thanks man.

edit: what off key intro?
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Unread post by mattinbeloit » Fri Apr 29, 2005 7:11 pm

KahnTheRevelator wrote:birds are because i had my window open while I was recording. thanks man.

edit: what off key intro?
at the beginning of the song, right before you hit the A it sounds different, i thought it was a good idea.

:edit: ya maybe you do that throghout the whole song, whatever, it was different i liked it.
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Unread post by HumbleMonkey » Fri Apr 29, 2005 7:12 pm

your not even playing the song right on guitar
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Unread post by chosta » Fri Apr 29, 2005 10:14 pm

try to bring out the higher strings after the 9-11 hammers on the verse, and sing out more. not too shabby mon
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Unread post by lyrics101 » Fri Apr 29, 2005 11:51 pm

HumbleMonkey wrote:your not even playing the song right on guitar
Agreed. Verse sound good, the chorus bugged me. You have a nice tone to your voice, but I don't think it fit the aggressive nature of the chorus, and you do need to work on the high notes. Are you singing from your diaphram? You should be able to feel your stomach shift, and a slight buzz in your nose with you push hard enough (not all the time, just to make sure the note is coming from the front; it's what opera singers, or so I understand, call "finding the note" or whatever). The constant volume changes drove me nuts as well.

Work on the production more, it'll be all right. I understand it was rushed.
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Unread post by Flakes » Sat Apr 30, 2005 10:03 am

Pretty good, maybe you played the intro differently on purpose, but if not, if was off
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Unread post by Kahn » Sat Apr 30, 2005 12:32 pm

Thanks you guys, good criticism. I'll work on my guitar and voice more.
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Unread post by trippinbilly314 » Sun May 01, 2005 3:50 pm

can someone please yousendit? thank you
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