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Unread post by hmm69 » Fri Feb 18, 2005 9:14 am

cool man it sound to punky for me to like but its good non the less :D

also i do think it would sound better if it was full band
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Unread post by trippin6strings » Sun Feb 20, 2005 11:53 am

Good tune, though i dont get the "OD'ing to feel free" line, like ive seen how a junkie can learn from his mistakes (mistake being pumping to much into their veins n such) but ive never gotten that vibe that they do it to feel free n liberated (or on purpose) but still nice work man, can relate to some of it. peace...
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Unread post by borocks » Sun Feb 20, 2005 2:06 pm

It's not really about a junkie. I had a different image in mind when I wrote the lyrics to the song. I thought about young people loitering through life, drinking, doing drugs living from hand to mouth, trying to be independant from other people, thinking this thing would last forever. Then one day they get up and look into the mirror and start refelcting about the past because they're fucked up now.
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Unread post by katie » Mon Feb 28, 2005 2:58 pm

this is great bo!

I love the lyrics as well. fun feel to this one, punky in a way. I love the guitar transitions, solid.

thanks for sharing.

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