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Unread post by indigo » Fri Nov 28, 2003 10:50 am

this is my first post and its also the first time i recorded coz i just got cool edit 2000.

Any comments or violent reactions are welcome.

http://www.angelfire.com/ab7/trebor0/jpmaker.mp3

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Unread post by DustyDave » Fri Nov 28, 2003 11:52 am

I'll listen to it when it becomes available
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Unread post by themaker » Sat Nov 29, 2003 11:12 am

jamming tayo in december pre. ayos!
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Unread post by themaker » Sat Nov 29, 2003 11:36 am

thanks sa comment mo pre sa LLD ko. yun nga lang dami sabi na trying like dave daw ako. well...totoo yon. it's probably because of singing along to his songs...pati style nya nagagaya ko. o well hehe

bout ure cover dude, i like how u played the song ure own style. i'm sure it'll be so much better with better recording quality... there's a huge difference pare. and i know coz if heard you sing live na.... keep on posting pare and hope to see you in december
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Unread post by thegr8monkeyman » Mon Dec 01, 2003 4:19 pm

It stars with a very gentle guitar, which does in fact attribute to your vocal style. You do hit the strings harder for some of the parts, when your voice rises. Which works for you. However you try to throw in the whine that Dave does, that pinching little crimping at the end of words. Other then that it is pretty solid. It has good flow, and your voice doesn't go flat, which a great bonus. It does have a very calm tone to the whole song, and that takes away from some of the emotion and passion that the song is trying to portray.

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Unread post by DJR » Mon Dec 01, 2003 5:26 pm

some of the guitar part seems a bit rough, but yeah, i liked it

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Unread post by Appfro » Mon Dec 01, 2003 6:15 pm

the guitar wasn't bad, just a little rough during the slides. your voice was on and off key at times, sounds like you need to let go and thatyou're holding back too much. really not that bad of a job, just needs some work.

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Unread post by DustyDave » Mon Dec 01, 2003 11:25 pm

Little rough on the guitar part , holding back again on the voice , open your mouth more when singing and blast that stuff out :) Good cover overall
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Unread post by indigo » Tue Dec 02, 2003 2:17 am

thanks for the comments :D , its helping me alot.
I kinda know that i'm holding my voice back like most of you said, but when i "let it out" i kinda get weirded out by myself. :oops: I think im also trying 2 damn hard 2 sound like dave.

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