New original about girls and too much alcohol :)

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New original about girls and too much alcohol :)

Unread post by rampaged.congt » Mon Feb 23, 2004 12:29 pm

Hey there,

This is my newest song I recorded just today on my crappy computer with a really bad sound quality...well it's not THAT bad...you can still give it a listen without becoming deaf...
I tried myself on some vocal harmonies that time and I think for the most part they turned out okay!

The song is about girls that had too much alcohol...
Enjoy and let me know what you think...

thx mike

:arrow: http://www.angelfire.com/jazz/rampaged.congtx/days.mp3


oh..and the song is called "days like these"
"... we'll make the best of what's around..."

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Unread post by souna » Mon Feb 23, 2004 1:31 pm

I like it brother the riff is nice and the harmonies are not bad at all you went off at some points and sound is sort of bad but i liked it made me laugh great job and welcome to the boards if I didn't welcome you yet
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Unread post by rampaged.congt » Mon Feb 23, 2004 5:51 pm

thanks souna for the feedback.
I've been around the boards for awhile already..but still thanks for the "welcome"
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Unread post by souna » Tue Feb 24, 2004 4:51 am

no probs my friend just haven't seen you before
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Unread post by DMBFan63 » Tue Feb 24, 2004 2:50 pm

It sort of reminded me of that Eagle Eye Cherry song.. i forget the name of it though.. great riff though :)
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Unread post by jjcucio » Tue Feb 24, 2004 2:54 pm

very impressive...voice is good, and words...simple yet creative. Good Stuff
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Unread post by rampaged.congt » Tue Feb 24, 2004 6:22 pm

thx for the feedback so far you guys...
what eagle eye cherry song does it remind you of...I only know "save tonight" by him...
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Unread post by DJR » Tue Feb 24, 2004 9:56 pm

oh cool opening riff - i like the tone quality of your voice - and nice harmony throughout, especially the "days like these" part - good job man :D

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Unread post by DMBFan63 » Tue Feb 24, 2004 10:56 pm

rampaged.congt wrote:thx for the feedback so far you guys...
what eagle eye cherry song does it remind you of...I only know "save tonight" by him...
Yeah, i think it's save tonight.. just the say you sing this song makes it sound like that to me
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