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please listen to and critique this

Unread post by Matty Boom » Fri Feb 13, 2004 1:32 pm

this is an instrumental original that i threw together in open D...i've never tried anything like this before, but people who have heard it have liked it so far, so give er a listen and let me know! oh yea, it's called 'yin'

http://www.angelfire.com/mech/mattyboom/yin.mp3
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Unread post by DT » Fri Feb 13, 2004 1:40 pm

i like it, especially the way the mood changes throughout the song- i like the build and then the stuff around 3:45, the harmonics you throw in sound cool as hell and the ending is smooth

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Unread post by NPR » Fri Feb 13, 2004 2:21 pm

Damn Matty that was awesome man! I got the feeling that it would be a good song to put into a movie. It just has that feeling that it is moving along. Like some one walking along and then they start jogging and then running faster and faster. Know what I mean. Just seems like it would fit in good in a movie.

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Unread post by TrippingBilly » Sat Feb 14, 2004 12:30 am

Reallllll nice matty! It's definitely to be commended, along with your new av. :wink: Time to add some lyrics!!!

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Unread post by Speenis » Sat Feb 14, 2004 6:01 am

it is the worst thing i have ever heard.......YEAH RIGHT! This song rocked the house and the foundation... I have trouble listening to it cuz it rocks so hard. YOU DA MAN MATTY
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Unread post by Matty Boom » Sat Feb 14, 2004 2:29 pm

heh, thanks guys
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Unread post by horsmar15 » Tue Feb 17, 2004 2:43 am

Very cool, you could definatley add lyrics too it. The only part I would change is to have a more gradual lead up to the fast/loud part. I am a fan of the open D, my newest song is also in open D.

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Unread post by DustyDave » Tue Feb 17, 2004 3:32 am

Lovely Matty , it reminds of something i can't quite put my finger on .... I loved listening , very good brother Matty , but uhmmmm where are the lyrics ? ;) Keep them coming :)
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Unread post by blaze » Tue Feb 17, 2004 9:20 am

good stuff really liked it alot.

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Unread post by souna » Fri Feb 20, 2004 9:43 am

very nice the bigining reminded me of cryptonite but it changed right after the first secounds which is good. great job plz add lyrics to it
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Unread post by Johnny25 » Fri Feb 20, 2004 3:52 pm

great job matty, i love it!
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