Song for you "sleep on stone"

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Song for you "sleep on stone"

Unread post by jwool » Fri Jan 30, 2004 1:49 pm


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Unread post by horsmar15 » Fri Jan 30, 2004 2:45 pm

Pretty good man, i liked it overall. The guitar riff was nice reminded me of a howie day riff for some reason. Also, the recording quality was really good. Your voice was good for the most part. The falsetto parts seemed to be off, and you seem to be a bit inconsistent. You have good tone though and so if you can work the bugs out this could be quite good.

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Unread post by ec_costanzo » Sat Jan 31, 2004 2:47 pm

I liked it
What did you do for recording b/c that sounded really good

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Unread post by AdamCU81 » Sat Jan 31, 2004 7:45 pm

Damn that's really good. Great sound and lyrics. Vocals remind me of Howie. The falsetto sounds fine to me.

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Unread post by DmbSid » Sun Feb 01, 2004 2:49 am

Great stuff...seriously what did you use to record?...It was very clean...Hope to hear more soon...
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Unread post by oldman » Sun Feb 01, 2004 9:56 am

Hey Jeff this is a really great song. I'm loving the melody and the bass note walk down in the main riff. Great job. Voice is solid for the most part....a couple weak moments but i think that added to the emotion of the song. Great work. Saved in music library.

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Unread post by ludes454 » Mon Feb 02, 2004 10:46 pm

Saved this one in my playlist!! (if you don't mind). You have a great voice man. Great lyrics and not to beat a dead horse but thats some quality recording right der.
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Unread post by JacknCoke » Tue Feb 03, 2004 12:39 am

Loved it..absolutely loved it....I agree with horsmar15, it did sound something like a howie day riff..and im a big fan of his...so good job..will put this one in the playlist..
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Unread post by jwool » Fri Feb 06, 2004 8:04 pm

Thanks for all the comments. I'll be playing a show in DC in march if anyone is interested, and I have free demo cd's available. just check out info on my site. take care.

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Unread post by DustyDave » Sat Feb 07, 2004 4:13 am

Just awesome brother , recording quality , voice / lyrics , guitar , everything was great and gave a very good calm and yet emotional feeling :)
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Unread post by Bartender2424 » Sat Feb 07, 2004 4:29 pm

A+, great sound altogether
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Unread post by 2StepGranny » Sat Feb 07, 2004 5:05 pm

Very well done! Great job! 8-)
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Unread post by mdel21 » Thu Feb 12, 2004 3:12 pm

I really liked it. I have it on repeat.

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Unread post by borocks » Thu Feb 12, 2004 4:01 pm

most awesome original I've ever heard on this board. That probably all I have to say
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