New Original Song: Saturday Sun

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New Original Song: Saturday Sun

Unread post by horsmar15 » Thu Jan 15, 2004 7:58 pm

Hey yall. Instead of a cover I have a new original song entitled Saturday Sun. This song is a good break from some of the harder songs I have tried to sing latley and it is nice to get to sing in my range :D . I recorded this after playing the song like 4 times so it is not perfect yet. I want some feedback to know if I should add this one to my live show list. Also, if yall like it I will rerecord it on a multitrack after playing it some more. I really like this one and I hope you all do too. Enjoy! http://horsmar15.tripod.com/index.html
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Unread post by Ando » Thu Jan 15, 2004 8:00 pm

Cool! Nick Drake has a song called Saturday sun ..
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Unread post by Matty Boom » Thu Jan 15, 2004 8:19 pm

i liked this...cool lyrics for sure! it seems kinda plain at times, but that's what you explained so no big deal, i'm sure with some work and polishing this could be awesome so do it do it do it!
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Unread post by horsmar15 » Thu Jan 15, 2004 9:42 pm

I did not know that Nick Drake had a song named that. Well then for now the song could be title pending.
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Unread post by DustyDave » Sun Jan 18, 2004 4:09 pm

Nice song , your vocals reminded me a little about John Mayers :)
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Unread post by Versacci41 » Mon Jan 19, 2004 8:19 pm

I liked that riff alot...vocals reminded me of mraz more than mayer...good job...
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Unread post by horsmar15 » Mon Jan 19, 2004 9:38 pm

wow, being compared vocaly to mraz and mayer. Well, frankly I know i'm not even close vocally to either of those artists, but thanks for the compliments
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Unread post by juineaux » Tue Jan 20, 2004 11:44 pm

I really like it. Your voice has a really nice qualitly and the rythmic jazz chord guitar is great with it. Good work!
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Unread post by souna » Wed Jan 21, 2004 1:08 pm

NICE NICE NICE.I like it a lot and yes do play that live it wouls sound great. very cool guitar very good vocals and very nice lyrics. great job
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Unread post by rochsuperstar » Wed Jan 21, 2004 11:26 pm

Sounded awesome, But i think you sound like J Johnson who i like.. Nice work man..
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