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Unread post by fatjack » Thu Jan 01, 2004 9:15 pm

just kidding its my still my other song, but i figured i'd get more attention like this :P

http://www.northridgesoccer.com/josh/Lo ... et_mp3.mp3

if that doesn't work go to this link and look for the song Logar's Pocket

http://www.northridgesoccer.com/josh
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Unread post by DreaminBassMunky » Thu Jan 01, 2004 10:38 pm

First thing I ever listened to in the recording section and I must say I like it.

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Banjo seems a little behind, and a little out of tune. I did enjoy the fact that there was a mandolin and a banjo, and the guitar and piano added a very solid backround. It's new, but it feels like it needs something. A more solid melody maybe. It's very solid. The thing is, if the banjo is going to be played as the prime instrument (and i know you are new at it, and I am quite impressed) it needs to be played with a little more convidence and variety. But for a two member band, I am very impressed. Keep up the good work.
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Unread post by juineaux » Thu Jan 01, 2004 10:59 pm

sounds good, a unique blend of instruments. There are some times when things arent really "tight", but its still really good. I would say mabey work on the mando track(sounds random sometimes), the banjo sounded awesome...especiallly at the end
Interesting song structure too!
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Unread post by fatjack » Thu Jan 01, 2004 11:01 pm

juineaux wrote:sounds good, a unique blend of instruments. There are some times when things arent really "tight", but its still really good. I would say mabey work on the mando track(sounds random sometimes), the banjo sounded awesome...especiallly at the end
Interesting song structure too!
Good work
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Unread post by Matty Boom » Thu Jan 01, 2004 11:03 pm

definitely good to hear something new like this on the boards...i liked it, wanna hear more of this type of stuff when you record it
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Unread post by fatjack » Thu Jan 01, 2004 11:04 pm

Matty Boom wrote:definitely good to hear something new like this on the boards...i liked it, wanna hear more of this type of stuff when you record it
there's plenty on my website, click my www button
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Unread post by juineaux » Thu Jan 01, 2004 11:12 pm

The piano sounded like it was recorded well. What do you use? was there an electric in there as well?

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Unread post by fatjack » Fri Jan 02, 2004 12:35 pm

juineaux wrote:The piano sounded like it was recorded well. What do you use? was there an electric in there as well?
i have a Casio CPS-80s, and i just plugged straight into the recorder with its line out, that piano is a godsend

there is an electric playing with a slide, thats probably one of my favorite aspects of the recording because it serves as a nice lift from the B section back to the A section
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Unread post by fatjack » Sat Jan 03, 2004 10:12 pm

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Unread post by NoNotThat » Sat Jan 03, 2004 10:37 pm

HI FATJACK!!! XD

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Unread post by DJR » Sat Jan 03, 2004 11:27 pm

the word i think of when i hear this is refreshing, really a different sound, i really enjoyed listening to this :D

keep it comin man

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Unread post by fatjack » Sat Jan 03, 2004 11:28 pm

DJR07 wrote:the word i think of when i hear this is refreshing, really a different sound, i really enjoyed listening to this :D

keep it comin man
heh, i knew i would snag somebody with my trick

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Re: Dave Cover!

Unread post by Ando » Sat Jan 03, 2004 11:35 pm

fatjack wrote:just kidding its my still my other song, but i figured i'd get more attention like this :P

http://www.northridgesoccer.com/josh/Lo ... et_mp3.mp3

if that doesn't work go to this link and look for the song Logar's Pocket

http://www.northridgesoccer.com/josh
dude, I always enjoy your stuff, good job man. Keep em comin

and good thinkin with the dave thing. :wink:
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Re: Dave Cover!

Unread post by fatjack » Sat Jan 03, 2004 11:36 pm

andyrice_13 wrote:
fatjack wrote:just kidding its my still my other song, but i figured i'd get more attention like this :P

http://www.northridgesoccer.com/josh/Lo ... et_mp3.mp3

if that doesn't work go to this link and look for the song Logar's Pocket

http://www.northridgesoccer.com/josh
dude, I always enjoy your stuff, good job man. Keep em comin

and good thinkin with the dave thing. :wink:
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Unread post by DJR » Sat Jan 03, 2004 11:40 pm

fatjack wrote:
DJR07 wrote:the word i think of when i hear this is refreshing, really a different sound, i really enjoyed listening to this :D

keep it comin man
heh, i knew i would snag somebody with my trick

thanks dude
me? listen to dave? although you doin a dave cover would probably be nice... :D

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