nineleven original

jester31 · Unread post by **jester31** » Fri Dec 26, 2003 6:46 pm

Here is an original. Not a great recording I know. Please offer any critique.

thanks

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/5/jessestonermusic.htm

rampaged.congt · Unread post by **rampaged.congt** » Fri Dec 26, 2003 7:09 pm

Very nice song.
It has good a cool rhythm to it. I like the "lalalalala"part.

You have a good voice-fits very well to the song.
What recording tool do you use? is there an echo of your voice or is that the quality of the song?
Again...nice little song!

Xoosh · Unread post by **Xoosh** » Sat Dec 27, 2003 1:01 am

besides the fact that it's so extrmely cliche i debated even listening to it... for my own sanity... the entire 9-11 situation was bad stuff and it's stuff we shuold remember, but i've been bashed over the head against my will by bad cliche poetry, art, and GOD DAMN COUNTRY MUSIC and music under every category of the sun...

BUT the intro is pretty nice and solid. your voice is very nice. but i simply abhor the lyrics. they sound great. you have a great style. i love the style. very few negative comments... but find something else to write about -- for the love of god.. please

/x

jester31 · Unread post by **jester31** » Sat Dec 27, 2003 9:25 am

Yea your right. I didn't think that much about it. I wonder if I changed the name would it be that bad. Do you think that the lyrics are as big of cliche as the title?

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