my "baby" cover

[horsmar15]

Hey there, here is my cover of baby. Basically, I wanted to test out the angelfire thing to see if it works. Disclamier: I just learned this song today and recorded it in a total of about an hour or so. Also, I recorded on my crappy dell mic on one track only. Take these factors in mind before totally ripping me apart. All that aside, Enjoy!!
http://www.angelfire.com/music5/horsmar15/

[AdamCU81]

Sounds really good overall. You may want to work on breathing...it sounds like you might not be breathing in the most efficient way, causing you to run out of breath at times. There's also times, I think when you take a deep breath, that your volume increases quite a bit. But I'm just being picky. Good one.