Hey peeps! Wanna check out an original song by me and a frie

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Hey peeps! Wanna check out an original song by me and a frie

Unread post by Wesdutchmaster » Wed Oct 15, 2003 5:41 pm

After sharing my humble little #41 and #40 clips, I thought maybe you wanted to hear a quick recording me and a friend did of a song we wrote [music by me, words + singing by friend of mine]. Once again it's done in my room with the help of my laptop, a tiny pc mic [so some levels are off], and Brian's help who is hosting the file. Let me know what you guys think! Feedback appreciated!

http://www.techhelpers.net/wes/Nadie_an ... r_Core.mp3
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Unread post by fatjack » Wed Oct 15, 2003 5:51 pm

that chick has a great voice man. nice guitar playing too
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Unread post by DJR » Wed Oct 15, 2003 5:59 pm

yeah i really like the guitar part good job

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Unread post by borocks » Wed Oct 15, 2003 6:00 pm

That was just awesome, I liked it very much. The song sounds really cool.
The low sound quality is the only thing which is likely to criticize. Except of that, just awesome.

The guitar playing sounded pretty simple but very soldid though. What I did like best was the voice. The voice of your friend is really really great. I think probably one of the best I've heard on these boards ever.

Keep on postin songs!
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Unread post by Appfro » Wed Oct 15, 2003 8:26 pm

the girl can wail. i think she kinda soundsl like the girl from evanessence...the studio type..not live, that chick sucks live. i would have liked to hear some harmonies and i don't think the song really compliments her voice that much. it does sound good, but she sounds like she has more range that what that song lets her excersise. the additional track in the middle of the song was a little too much and drowned her out, but im sure we're not going for recording quality.

awesome stuff near the end. i loved the multi tracks of her voice. awesome awesome awesome. good job you two. very impressed.

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Unread post by DMBFan63 » Wed Oct 15, 2003 10:24 pm

sounded kick ass man.. I agree with app though, she should give her voice it's full range.. she does sort of sound like that chick from evanessence.. and yea, she can't sing live..rofl :-p But yea, thats cool.. I wish I had a chick that would come sing for me when i play.. :)
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Unread post by Appfro » Wed Oct 15, 2003 10:29 pm

DMBFan63 wrote:sounded kick ass man.. I agree with app though, she should give her voice it's full range.. she does sort of sound like that chick from evanessence.. and yea, she can't sing live..rofl :-p But yea, thats cool.. I wish I had a chick that would come sing for me when i play.. :)
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Unread post by mbgreen » Wed Oct 15, 2003 11:03 pm

Did you take this down? I would have liked to hear it...
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Unread post by Appfro » Wed Oct 15, 2003 11:16 pm

still works for me.

if you can't get it to work, IM me, ill send it to you.

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Unread post by mbgreen » Wed Oct 15, 2003 11:45 pm

Well, the link didnt work for me. But thanks to a little help from Appfro, I got the file.

I'm going to have to concur with the status quo on this one. That girl's voice is fucking great. Its a pretty cool little guitar riff too...nice and simple. I'm seriously impressed. Great job on this one.
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Unread post by Ricky the Pilot » Thu Oct 16, 2003 1:21 am

Great song. The girl sounds just like Dolores M. O'Riordan Burton of the Cranberries.
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Unread post by Wesdutchmaster » Thu Oct 16, 2003 5:19 am

wow guys! I'm really surprised and happy about the feedback! :) glad you like it!
I'm going to be in NYC from next week on for quite a while, anyone from there that wants to jam?

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Unread post by squall2811 » Wed Dec 24, 2003 1:09 pm

:D That was really good bro. Liked the both the singing and the playing. I like the little echo affect you put on your friends voice. You playing was on spot, just give me some time to fix my computer and I'll eventually put something up. all in all Good Job man

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Unread post by Xoosh » Wed Dec 24, 2003 2:59 pm

outside of the recording quality...

my critique:

the girl who comes in singing has a SOLID very present voice. It's reminiscent to me of that scottish or irish group that was real popular a while ago... though i dont remmeber their name.. the cardigans? no that's not it... uhm... cranberries? lol i dont remember.. anyways, the guitar and vocals work together very nicely... is this an orriginal?

to be honest if i heard this song live in a set, i'd be EXTREMELY glad i came to the show... this kind of moving song... is the PERFECT balance of slow with passion. (up to like 2:00)

"because summer days are quickly passing" -- damn the lyrics are beautiful. the harmony that happens after that phrase is fantastic.

it get's SUPER muddy at like 2:20 though i assume that the muddiness is more a factor of the recording quality then anything else... the vocals balance this muddiness very nicely...

cant say enough good about this... where are you guys from? maybe i could help you guys get a really nice recording.. i'd love to get a good copy of this song.. it's one of those rare songs that just hits me hard in the middle of my 'self'

GREAT FUCKIN WORK

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Unread post by Xoosh » Wed Dec 24, 2003 3:02 pm

yeah this song has been on repeat for about 30 minutes now, fuckin love it.


ahhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!

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