Run Away...Please Listen. :)

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Run Away...Please Listen. :)

Unread post by dmbguitar718 » Sat Oct 11, 2003 2:44 pm

Well, I've never really had any success writing my own music, but I just couldn't stop playing this song. I really liked, so I recorded it. None of my other originals have sounded like this before, they were usually crap.

so here you go.

http://www.angelfire.com/musicals/mr_pat3/runaway.mp3
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Unread post by rampaged.congt » Sat Oct 11, 2003 3:05 pm

Nice little song..I like it.

good job!

Why did you call it "run away"?
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Unread post by dmbguitar718 » Sat Oct 11, 2003 3:16 pm

rampaged.congt wrote:Nice little song..I like it.

good job!

Why did you call it "run away"?
well, when i was trying to put lyrics to it, "run away" was that was really coming out.

and i guess it also fits in with how it strays from the rest of my works.
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Unread post by Appfro » Sat Oct 11, 2003 3:27 pm

listening while i type

good little progression. pretty basic sounds good. the lead is cool too. not too showy. fits really well

you spiced the lead up a little in the end, which sounded really good, but it was a little too choppy. try to kinda smooth it out a little.

good stuff. id like to hear lyrics.
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Unread post by dmbguitar718 » Sun Oct 12, 2003 11:53 am

thanks guys. im trying to put lyric into it, but im a not a big fan lyrics i guess. i cant write for shit, and it would just ruin the song.

but i do plan on making a longer version.
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Unread post by Appfro » Sun Oct 12, 2003 12:47 pm

dmbguitar718 wrote:thanks guys. im trying to put lyric into it, but im a not a big fan lyrics i guess. i cant write for shit, and it would just ruin the song.

but i do plan on making a longer version.
welcome to the "i can't write for shit" club. there's are plenty of us
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Unread post by dmbguitar718 » Mon Oct 13, 2003 4:28 pm

top. :)
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Random movie quote to make you seem hip and "with it": Do you use this word? Alcoves?

Unread post by DJR » Mon Oct 13, 2003 4:30 pm

too bad your site got shut down, i wanted to listen, i like your stuff
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Unread post by dmbguitar718 » Mon Oct 13, 2003 5:12 pm

it should be back up now. :)
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