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Unread post by GreedylilPig » Thu Oct 09, 2003 6:22 pm

I slowed it down a little bit... I was in a mellow mood. I think this recording might have a little too much reverb. Let me know.

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Unread post by isaac » Thu Oct 09, 2003 6:27 pm

hey man, i liked it a lot. you have a pretty solid voice...the only problem i had is that it was toooooo slooooow. speed it up a little more and you'll have it down great. :) keep up the good work, though.
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Unread post by Appfro » Thu Oct 09, 2003 6:34 pm

ok so for some reason when i download it, i only get a little bit of it. first it was 30 secs the next time was 1:41.

anyway, what i heard was really good. isaac's right maybe a little too slow, it caused you to throw off your rhythm a little, but it's not a big problem.

your voice is really good. solid. sounds a lot like dave actually.

great job man

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Unread post by Ranting Thespian » Fri Oct 10, 2003 3:20 am

the problem with it being slow, there is so much empty space for this song, it gets a little dull. You can keep it slow, but add more to it, that would be a lot better. But, other than how slow it was, it was good, I didn't find anything wrong with it :) .
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