Instrumental Guitar Jam(updated)

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Instrumental Guitar Jam(updated)

Unread post by juineaux » Mon Jul 21, 2003 8:13 pm

I posted about a week or so a jam that I did live with another guitarist, well i re-did it at home this morning solo, and I think it sounds alot nicer. I made some changes to it, please tell me what you think?

New link, for same song:
it under the part that says NEW song-
http://geocities.com/tjmusic462/tomcadaret.html
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Unread post by NPR » Mon Jul 21, 2003 9:02 pm

Holy Shit dude this is awesome!!!

I have listened to alot of your songs and all of them are top notch man! Once I get enough of them I am gonna burn a CD so I can listen to them in my car man!!

Nice job!!!

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Unread post by billywestom » Mon Jul 21, 2003 9:10 pm

wow, great song tom, definitely of Tim Reynolds type quality. how many tracks is this?
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Unread post by saleen » Tue Jul 22, 2003 1:04 am

too much bandwidth, if someone sees me online and wants to send it?
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Unread post by juineaux » Tue Jul 22, 2003 1:43 am

Thanks alot!
its only one track,
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Unread post by billywestom » Tue Jul 22, 2003 1:38 pm

juineaux wrote:Thanks alot!
its only one track,
I hate that my site keeps going down, i wish i could get iuma to work for me again-
only one track?!?!?! i cant believe you can get all that strumming and picking and stuff together...great job...
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Unread post by fatjack » Tue Jul 22, 2003 1:46 pm

juineaux wrote:Thanks alot!
its only one track,
I hate that my site keeps going down, i wish i could get iuma to work for me again-
yep, angelfire sucks...
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Unread post by billywestom » Tue Jul 22, 2003 2:56 pm

I'mWithFatjack wrote:Angelfire licks my chode
angelfire eats my frumunda cheese
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Unread post by juineaux » Tue Jul 22, 2003 4:33 pm

yea im probably just gonna end up getting my own website, just becuase of the problems with angelfire

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Unread post by juineaux » Tue Jul 22, 2003 8:44 pm

its back up :D

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Unread post by fatjack » Tue Jul 22, 2003 9:29 pm

juineaux wrote:its back up :D
not anymore... :(
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ok

Unread post by clay » Tue Jul 22, 2003 10:38 pm

everytime I check it's temporarily unavailable.
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Unread post by juineaux » Wed Jul 23, 2003 12:00 am

Ok, i just went through geocities instead, it took a while more, but it will work better. Thanks for putting up with me-

under the part that says "NEW song"
http://geocities.com/tjmusic462/tomcadaret.html

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Unread post by fatjack » Wed Jul 23, 2003 12:17 am

that was pretty freakin cool, but if you want to be critiqued...

the two or three bends you had in the song were way off... don't bend so much, you got off key...

and some parts of the song lacked any real bass line... some parts were just shredding left out in mid-air, this was only in a few parts. you may like that kind of thing, but to me, shredding for the sake of shredding gets old real fast... when you had bass strings or were strumming full out, that had my attention more than the shredding...

overall, this is very damn good, your speed is quite impressive, but too much speed can be a bad thing (not knockin' it at all, heck, i wish i could play that fast!)...
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