Instrumental Guitar Jam(updated)
Instrumental Guitar Jam(updated)
I posted about a week or so a jam that I did live with another guitarist, well i re-did it at home this morning solo, and I think it sounds alot nicer. I made some changes to it, please tell me what you think?
New link, for same song:
it under the part that says NEW song-
http://geocities.com/tjmusic462/tomcadaret.html
New link, for same song:
it under the part that says NEW song-
http://geocities.com/tjmusic462/tomcadaret.html
Last edited by juineaux on Wed Jul 23, 2003 12:04 am, edited 2 times in total.
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only one track?!?!?! i cant believe you can get all that strumming and picking and stuff together...great job...juineaux wrote:Thanks alot!
its only one track,
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Ok, i just went through geocities instead, it took a while more, but it will work better. Thanks for putting up with me-
under the part that says "NEW song"
http://geocities.com/tjmusic462/tomcadaret.html
under the part that says "NEW song"
http://geocities.com/tjmusic462/tomcadaret.html
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that was pretty freakin cool, but if you want to be critiqued...
the two or three bends you had in the song were way off... don't bend so much, you got off key...
and some parts of the song lacked any real bass line... some parts were just shredding left out in mid-air, this was only in a few parts. you may like that kind of thing, but to me, shredding for the sake of shredding gets old real fast... when you had bass strings or were strumming full out, that had my attention more than the shredding...
overall, this is very damn good, your speed is quite impressive, but too much speed can be a bad thing (not knockin' it at all, heck, i wish i could play that fast!)...
the two or three bends you had in the song were way off... don't bend so much, you got off key...
and some parts of the song lacked any real bass line... some parts were just shredding left out in mid-air, this was only in a few parts. you may like that kind of thing, but to me, shredding for the sake of shredding gets old real fast... when you had bass strings or were strumming full out, that had my attention more than the shredding...
overall, this is very damn good, your speed is quite impressive, but too much speed can be a bad thing (not knockin' it at all, heck, i wish i could play that fast!)...
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