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firedancer86 · Unread post by **firedancer86** » Mon Jul 07, 2003 6:18 pm

progress in work people...I just made it up and improved the whole secong track from nothing...maybe some sour notes, but I plan on writing lyrics to it...the secong guitar in the "chorus" (if you will) is what I have for a vocal melody...already have some lyrics...tell me what you think...I would love to spiffy it up...add some more jammin' delay, and add some bongos and give it a real nic3e acoustic feel...if you havea second, drop a comment by...

http://www.cadenzaspell.com/inyou.mp3

Pickles · Unread post by **Pickles** » Mon Jul 07, 2003 6:19 pm

wow man.... really pretty... very mellow.. what are your thoughts on the lyrics?

firedancer86 · Unread post by **firedancer86** » Mon Jul 07, 2003 6:22 pm

thought ?(sorry..AIM is giving me REAL problems :roll:

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Pickles · Unread post by **Pickles** » Mon Jul 07, 2003 6:24 pm

what lyrics do you have already

firedancer86 · Unread post by **firedancer86** » Mon Jul 07, 2003 6:25 pm

shane wrote:what lyrics do you have already

you'll know em when you hear em' :wink:

fatjack · Unread post by **fatjack** » Mon Jul 07, 2003 6:29 pm

that is one of the most beautiful songs i've ever heard. sounds like a song you listen to while staring at the sky and laying next to your girlfriend (now if only had one... :cry:

). anyway good job once again.

btw, i've finally discovered the IUMA, so hopefully you might have some competition around here real soon :wink:

firedancer86 · Unread post by **firedancer86** » Mon Jul 07, 2003 6:34 pm

sounds good man...

thanks for the comments...

The Man of The Hour · Unread post by **The Man of The Hour** » Mon Jul 07, 2003 6:43 pm

Very , very beautiful. One of the best improve jams I've heard, keep it up

Trippin Hillbilly · Unread post by **Trippin Hillbilly** » Mon Jul 07, 2003 6:55 pm

Damn fire.....thats so sweet, i've listened to it a few times now.
Incredible......there were a few sour notes every now and then but I guess you were just feelin your way around....damn, sounds amazing.

You should definately add some lyrics to this, it kinda reminds me of a song that would be on a show like dawson's creek..........hope that doesn't piss you off.. Meant in a good way

Great stuff fire!!

juineaux · Unread post by **juineaux** » Tue Jul 08, 2003 12:52 am

i like it

i think the bongos or a djembe would be a great addition. I would make them pretty driving instead of just in the backround. The guitars can go slow while the beat just keeps churning. I like the cool little melody and the rolling bass line thing you do when you get into it.
Do you ever listen to micheal hedges?
i could see you playing that type of music(micheal hedges style), very melodic and rythmic at the same time. anyways great work cant wait to hear more.

longleggedfrog · Unread post by **longleggedfrog** » Tue Jul 08, 2003 7:51 am

Great job, I really enjoyed listening to it. It was very story like, if that makes sense. Good luck with the lyrics.

foxymophandlemama · Unread post by **foxymophandlemama** » Tue Jul 08, 2003 8:22 am

[quote="fatjack"]that is one of the most beautiful songs i've ever heard. sounds like a song you listen to while staring at the sky and laying next to your girlfriend (now if only had one... :cry:

)]

I have to agree with Fatjack...Except make that boyfriend in my case... :lol:

really awesome song...

Good JOB!!!

barcode · Unread post by **barcode** » Tue Jul 08, 2003 8:50 am

what type of guitar(s) are you playing? (sounds awesome by the way!)

VTDreaminwithDMB · Unread post by **VTDreaminwithDMB** » Tue Jul 08, 2003 9:07 am

Man, that is great stuff. Judging from the posts on here you have already made a connection with peoples emotions. With some good lyrics that song will be complete.

Roastbeef · Unread post by **Roastbeef** » Tue Jul 08, 2003 10:00 am

Very cool. I like it a lot. I'm sure vocals will make it really great, especially considering your voice. Can't wait!

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