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cmarti10 · Unread post by **cmarti10** » Wed Jun 24, 2009 7:17 am

http://www.sendspace.com/file/rt0vi0
any criticism appreciated. one take no excuses balls out

cmarti10 · Unread post by **cmarti10** » Fri Jun 26, 2009 12:57 pm

ill take anything..

cmarti10 · Unread post by **cmarti10** » Fri Jul 03, 2009 10:55 am

nice talkin to ya

Easy E · Unread post by **Easy E** » Fri Jul 03, 2009 7:46 pm

You really seem to struggle to hold your breath long enough to complete a phrase or maybe you are taking your breathe at the wrong time. It throws off the flow of the lyrics just enough to be distracting.

I like the emotion you used during the second half of the song, but there's gotta be some kind of build towards that like the song itself implies. It was just all very ho hum and then all of a sudden you are screaming at the top of your lungs

Easy E · Unread post by **Easy E** » Mon Jul 06, 2009 5:09 pm

nice talkin to ya

cmarti10 · Unread post by **cmarti10** » Tue Jul 07, 2009 10:03 am

lol thank you. yeah its very very low for me. thank you for your post. i will try to record a song that is more in my range next time. i just had to record this song because it really struck some emotions inside of me that had to come out at the time they did. take it easy and thanks again

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